Reviews for Alternate Elevator Scene
Guest chapter 10 . 7/4/2016
Well written, i could see it all as if i was watching a movie
Guest chapter 8 . 7/4/2016
Who could it be than rowan/eli pope?
Jasminegirl123 chapter 1 . 6/28/2016
Jasminegirl123 chapter 13 . 6/2/2016
Jasminegirl123 chapter 12 . 6/2/2016
yep stand for your woman
Jasminegirl123 chapter 9 . 6/2/2016
Guest chapter 9 . 3/29/2016
Great writing, but sad that the baby will perish because someone intended harm olivia
Guest chapter 8 . 3/29/2016
I think the person on other end was either mellie or someone close to whod have as much to lose by her loss of the whitehouse
Guest chapter 13 . 12/21/2015
Fantastic twist, i surely thought the mastermind would've been Mellie, but someone close to her Did not enter my mind, but it does go to show how power hungry Mellie was and the one closest to her, would do something so horrible to secure her position as first lady; great writing snd thanks fir a story that held my interest
Guest chapter 12 . 12/21/2015
Ok, so possessive, protective Fitz is back and i am sure there'll be hell to pay, cant wait for more, i think the person who ordered the hit is Mellie, because she has gotten wind that he maybe considering to leave her now that he's won the presidency and knowing how much she is drunk on power, she wanted his only distraction to be taken out of the picture; that way, she could remain first lady and not have to explain anything to her children plus there would be no news of his infidelity, just the unfortunate passing of his campaign fixer
Guest chapter 11 . 12/21/2015
Well, i think you might just pulled it off, however how are you plan on handling the mellie and karen drama?
Guest chapter 10 . 12/21/2015
Great recovery, shes not a selfish woman and was able to offer comfort in the face of such a tragedy; they will be fine together
Guest chapter 9 . 12/21/2015
Wow, is all i can say, how the heck are you going to recover this?, fitz will be devastated that liv was injuered and the baby was lost!, but they are young and love each other and love survives right?please make it so that their lose diesnt totally destroy them, maybe this will prompt fitz to drop out of the race snd take liv home to recover and talk things through, together theyll figure out a way to handle Karen's insecurities, nelli's melodramatics and find a wy back to each other withe promise of getting together and planning for another baby down the line
Guest chapter 8 . 12/21/2015
I think it was jake!
Guest chapter 7 . 12/21/2015
Thats pretty heavy stuff, how will he reconcile all of these issues?, i hope you have miracle planned
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