Reviews for Sabotage
shay.grande chapter 5 . 12/8/2014
Lovely story! I really loved Rose's involvement in the story. The way you portrayed Cormac was also very realistic. I'll definitely be reading the sequel. :)
CreativityUR1688 chapter 2 . 8/25/2014
"Mr. Malfoy, we aim to please." From Fifty Shades of Grey? Not hating. Loving actually! Loving this story so far! Great job! Dramione 5ever! 3
The-Dragon's-Secret chapter 4 . 6/13/2014
When Draco told her about his father's cheque, my heart actually pounded and thudded - and I don't do that. When reading (and in life in general) I'm apathetic. I was ready to make a witty comment, but I genuinely adored Draco. Off to read your sequel. I'd really love to know more about their relationship and why it didn't work.
Also, there are a few little mistakes here and there. For example, you use my instead of me sometimes. Just a read over would make your story even better than it already is!
SicilyRoyalty chapter 2 . 9/8/2013
despite the fact that she's just as evil and manipulating as you – if not more so –
That made me laugh! Excellent fic'
Guest chapter 4 . 7/26/2013
Well, this was pointless. Hermione acted brainless and blind.
Lili Bibi chapter 3 . 5/25/2013
Lol, Blaise
Lili Bibi chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Ha! Hes jealous :))
Crissytje chapter 4 . 1/2/2013
Oh oh oh ! I really liked your fic very much ... It was written brilliantly and full of emotions. The story just pulls you into it and it made me experience all the emotions the characters were feeling. I felt Draco's desperation and destain, Rose's anger, Cormac's smugness ( I really wanted to hurt him), Hermione's conflict,... It really took me for ride. I kept wondering if Hermione should have been told about her stupid fiance's infidelity...

There was one thing I was doubting about and I really hope you won't be insulted by it ...

{She smiles weakly, pulling away from him. "You're a sadist, then."

Draco smirks, shoving his hands into his pockets to keep himself (and his hormones) in check. "Always have been, always will be. I married you, didn't I?" he jokes.

It's the only way he'll be able to survive the next few days, at least.


Draco Malfoy doesn't sleep all night. A sadist, he truly is, as he spends hours upon hours in the middle of the night thinking. Thinking about the past and the present and the future. He can't imagine a life without her, in any way, which is the only reason why he still intends to go to the blasted wedding.} I was wondering if you didn't mean masochist instead of sadist both those times. I can't seem to be able to figure out the joke otherwise... Why would he have to be a sadist in order to marry her, more like a masochist no? And the second, he is like torturing himself by thinking about the wedding, which sound more like masochism than sadism. Of course perhaps I am mistaken. I do apologise profoundly if i am :)

I loved it

CaptainFlamingoPants chapter 4 . 11/13/2012
Beautiful, very well-written story. Absolutely loved it.
silvermaze18 chapter 5 . 9/1/2012
Cormac is such a git gahh!
I love how you portrayed Rose :)
I had fun reading this fic :D Going to read the sequel now! :)
Day Met the Night chapter 3 . 7/31/2012
Well, McLaggen's a right little bastard, isn't he? You wrote him exactly as I started imagining him after seeing the sixth film. This story is absolutely wonderful and I can't wait to see how everything plays out :)
Day Met the Night chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Hahaha, I love how you write Rose and Blaise, they are absolutely brilliant in this chapter. Lovely start, I'm really enjoying your fics :)
Readerjkr chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
Fast and furious. Very enjoyable.
Spectral Guise chapter 4 . 6/20/2012
I have read a couple of your stories and I love this one the most. It reads very fluently; word choice and dialogues. There were just a few minor spelling mistakes, but overall great work. A positive evolution on the division of paragraphs ;)

Well written! Plotwise; good of course :)
Dancing-Souls chapter 4 . 6/19/2012
Awe sniffs. That was cute.
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