|Reviews for Disappear|
| OwlishBish chapter 1 . 2/12
Aww this made me teary-eyed! It needs a little refining, but other than that, its really good! Thanks for this!
| Ann Johnson chapter 1 . 1/11
Your writing is amazing and your story is quite touching
You did a great job and other than a couple grammatical errors it is well done
| jan chapter 1 . 1/11
very moving and well written Ashton
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2016
Great, u should publish it!
| An Adoring Fan chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
Hey! This was great. I don't have an account so I'd like to tell you that for the poll I would choose the end.
| dillydill11 chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
i like it
| a kiss of winter chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
GOD DAMN YOU FOR BREAKING MY FEELS WITH THIS AMAZING STORY
| Luke Skywalker-Solo chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Oh my god... That was so sad :'( I almost cried when the baby died... So sad... I loved it though :)
| scribb1es chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
amazing. truly amazing. You could feel the raw emotion throughout the whole piece. A really good piece of writing
| mazeygrace18 chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
OMG Saddest story ever! But I luved it and think you hould make a sequel for it when they are found and maybe have the rest of the gang and they're all in New York
| HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
| LoveMyGalaxy chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
That was amazingly beautiful. Definitely one of the best stories I've read on here. I like the raw emotion, and the fact that it felt like a song or something. It's going straight to my favorites ;)
| juliar99 chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Vey good story I love it I love the plot
| SweetGoodbyes16 chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
This is definitely different from what you write usually. But this is certainly one of the greatest One-Shots I've ever read. I find it so sad when Melissa died though, that almost made me cry. Great job on the One-Shot.
| It's rose hun chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Omg this is amazing I cried so hard when the baby died&was so upset with how the students were treating her, continue this story. Amazing!