Phew, so relieved to read there is a second part to this, I’ve been enjoying it! Looking forward to the next bit

The author did such fantastic nd believable plot that had me mesmerized.

Omg I’m seeing this was last updated in 2012 and it doesn’t feel like this could be completed in the next 4 chapters, noooooo. Ok,, ok, I’ll hope for the best

Interesting to have Tywin killed by a shadow. Not because Joffery is king, because the line then falls to Tommen, but because Stannis supposedly couldn’t given Melisandre another son in the show. Not sure about the books, but I know that’s the thing about FF :)
Nice, didn’t see it coming

Sad to see Brienne struck down but she only left in GOT because Catelyn convinced her to leave

Looking forward to seeing if you have Robb actually marry into the Freys. I think with his father there he would have been less likely to bed and wed outside of his agreement but can’t wait to see.

Were there some small changes in chapter 3? I didn’t think podric was in tyrions employ until after he reached Westeros

I absolutely loved this fic. You and I wanted the same things out of the first book, for Ned to survive and everything that came with it. I'm going to read part 2 now, and I'm forward to seeing Jon!

Amazing i going to part 2 now keep the good work

Ayra and Gendry make me sick. They feel so forced and not to mention the age difference. I'm at the point where I just skip over them whenever they pop up.

Words cannot explain how scared I was that there was going to be a Red Wedding. I'm very happy to see that it didn't happen! I literally sighed in relief, lol. Great fic!

Interesting choice to have one of the biggest players himself as a POV. I feel like you missed a couple opportunities there, played it a bit too safe, and just used Varys as a way to get rid of unnecessary flashbacks or explanations for the reader later, without giving away anything of him as a person or his goals or motivations, except that fAegon in this fic might be the real deal after all.

As terrible as it was, this was a very good chapter! I'm so glad that Maester Luwin had a peaceful ending surrounded by people who loved and respected him, compared to the show! Honestly I feel the Weirwood Tree would be the best, most peaceful place for him to pass.

Ohh, Theon. What a greedy, prideful, misled soul! His father is so cruel. But taking Winterfell was so foolish. And releasing Ramsey Bolton, the monster? That was SO STUPID!

Bran and Rickon fled with Hodor! Thank goodness!

Great chapter! Indeed, Arya. The wild little wolf cub is being tamed... to a point. It's good to see her growing, confused by these new feelings of love, and realizing that not all girly things are stupid.

Gendry is such a great guy. And it's a good thing he's a patient person, and not rash like Arya. He knows that defying her parents will not accomplish their goal.

Good for you, Sansa. Acknowledging the true need for learning the use of arms.

Wow! It was Joffrey. UGH! You know what is sickening more than Joffrey 's monstrous actions? The idea that Cersei will deny it and blame it all on Tyrion! Her son was a holy horror and everybody knows it. I doubt she will even believe her own daughter. She'll say Tyrion told them to lie for him to make himself innocent. I can't stand Cersei!

Thank goodness the Hound was looking after Myrcella!

Hot Pie! Good to have him around. He and Pod ought to get along good.