Reviews for Ned Stark Lives! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So please continue this story. I hav always wondered what would happen if Ned hadn't had his head chopped off. I am curious to see where you take this. Keep up the good writing |
![]() ![]() This story deserves much more attention than it's currently receiving. Do you have an account on archiveofourown? You could also submit it to some fanfiction tumblrs and they'd be more than willing to get it out there. Truly amazing work. I am impressed! |
![]() ![]() Interesting story, will be nice to see Tyrion talk with Ned. Looks like Ned is planning on leaving when he meets Robb. That would be an interesting story Ned and Robb in rebellion or possible peace, better then a Ned taking the black story imo, but either could be interesting. I love Arya interacting with the others as a boy but still trying to obey for father. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aaah, and when it got so interresting...:p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fascinating work on this. Well done. Keep at it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im curious to see where this is going. Its great that you gave us a Varys chapter, he knows far too much ;] Cheers! |
![]() ![]() Interesting turn of events, I look forward to seeing Ned's reaction to Tyrion, and if he'll listen when Tyrion when he tells him that he didn't send the assassin to kill Bran. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Promising start, but change these: Balish - Baelish Joffery - Joffrey Slint - Slynt Jaquen - Jaqen |
![]() ![]() I don't think I'm exaggerating when I say Tywin Lannister is a cross between Machiavelli and Adolf Hitler (at least in my mind). Poor Tyrion, still trying to praise daddy... Very curious how this will work out. |
![]() ![]() Very, very well done. you do the changing POVs as well as GRRM, if I may say so. Yoren sounded very much like canon-him - it was good to hear his story. |
![]() ![]() Glad to see another chapter, and it was a good one. I can't wait to see what happens as they head north, if they come across Robb, what Ned has to say when they reach the Wall and he's reunited with Jon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, another new chapter. Yoren is awesome. After Ned's opinion of Lord Frey I wonder what he'll say to two of his kids betrothed to Freys? |
![]() ![]() Very interesting start. I love how you show Littlefinger's and Varys' machinations. Hope you'll update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story. Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an amazing opening. I cannot wait to see where you go with this. I love the bit where Varys giggles to himself and his little game with Baelish. Littlefinger has no idea how outclassed he really is. |