Reviews for Again and Again
cerulean369 chapter 17 . 3/21/2021
nessiesmith2012 chapter 41 . 3/15/2021
well there are only 3 more chapters but chapter 41 kinda killed it for me.

he blabbed everything to dumbledore. before that it was hermione. he spilled some to remus. with no contracts between em. He went from sly and cunning to hufflepuff share everything.

it feels super rushed and forced. harry would not be blabbing to dumbledore. especially so soon.

if you ever pick this back up. one suggestion is that when he tells the same story over n over again to kinda bypass it. you write it indepth nearly everytime he decides its story time. Long repetitive information dumps are not a good thing. second suggestion is dont change harry to much so soon. jesus you bring it up that hes a tired jaded 600 old man but he flipped his personality on a dime.
Mushishixxxholic chapter 43 . 3/15/2021
Love it
PanaMara chapter 44 . 3/8/2021
I don't know if you're still checking on the reviews of this story but I want you to know that I really enjoyed reading it. It's brilliant and I do like your ideas. So if you ever intend to post another chapter, I'll be glad reading it as well.
QuibbleMeThis chapter 44 . 3/7/2021
So after reading this for the umpteenth time since you last updated I have decided that I absolutely must grace you with my ideas on ‘How to get the magical population to move to the Island’
Because, you know, you didn’t ask and most likely don’t want to know!
My idea is to, once you’ve got the place all terraformed and greened, start it off as a holiday resort. Build a hotel, or several hotels. Add on a spa and scenic flying trails and romantic sunset carpet rides and advertise relaxing holidays for amazing low prices. Raffle off free weekends. Gift holidays to influential people. Build a wonderful, magical shopping district, a nice spacious place with lots of restaurants and a nice big park with magical fountains and plants and children's playgrounds and sea views that contrast with Diagon alleys cramped quarters. Make the shops bigger and the rent cheaper than Diagon and get Narcissa and all the other ladies to meet there for lunch. Hold conferences and symposiums. Build a public library. Build a Quidditch pitch and host the world cup in a place where nobody has to pretend to be a muggle...
And then when everybody is in totally love with the place, start selling off blocks of land at affordable prices and open a school. Within a few years everyone will be wanting to move to New Avalon without any kind of coercion at all.
Yes, I know, I’m a genius! Don’t thank me...

Sorry, do feel free to ignore all that. I’m sleep deprived and giggling over the idea of Bellatrix working as a Concierge or an Event Planner...
blackbloodywolf chapter 44 . 3/6/2021
This is an incredible story I hope it continues!
stapletapewormsonmypenis chapter 12 . 2/28/2021
Oh this is brilliant so far. I love the way you've written everyone, and poor Lucius! I've always wondered about how Voldemort reacted to the loss of his diary in canon. Only thing that gets me is the long explanations, they're detailed, I suppose, but it's a bit much...
Chezakeeba chapter 44 . 2/27/2021
Love this story!
reader chapter 1 . 2/25/2021
This is just so interesting. Almost a cliffhanger with this sudden attack, and how it opens up so much new plot angles. Ach! I love how he's building inroads with some gryffindors, like Neville. And even a potential tentative with Ron looks possible over time from here, which could be interesting to see how anything develops as he matures. And I love him and Marvolo together. And this plot with the island, would love to see how they build everything. Would love to see Harry as he gets to know some of the death eaters, since this is potentially the first life he's had a chance to really get to know them as people and to work alongside them. So there's a lot there that could be new to him. And he'll surely have plenty of opportunities to see them differently as they build their island together, since they are the helpers on hand for that. I think it's going to be amazing (the island). I'm really so intrigued by this new mystery attack! dangit. and it ends up on the wrong side of an updates break. *sigh* I'll have to remember to check back sometimes. This has a lot of interesting and cool worldbuilding. This is just such an interesting fic...
Guest chapter 44 . 2/24/2021
I don’t know if you are going to continue this since it’s 2021 but this is a really amazing story and I like it even better than the books and I really want to know how it ends
Mushishixxxholic chapter 44 . 2/23/2021
Love it
adelalovesmadara chapter 19 . 2/20/2021
Idiot? Harry is not that. He's worse. He's worse than a bag of rocks. Dumb as hell. Ugh...
adelalovesmadara chapter 15 . 2/20/2021
Walburga and Orion are NOT first cousins! They're second cousins! This is... ughhh! Why did you get this one thing wrong?! .
taoyi chapter 1 . 2/17/2021
这一段话再用中文说一下哈з我已经把您的故事推荐给我的朋友们了,他们都很喜欢您!感谢您的创作I have recommended your story to my friends, and they like you very much!(this is a translated by computer)

thank you for writing!
taoyi chapter 44 . 2/17/2021
Your stories are wonderful! I'm a Chinese named 陶旖(taoyi)and I'm not very good at E I can't exactly know what's happening for my poor English,but it doesn't matter how I like it! And I really really really want to express my appreciation for your bringing such great sentences may have some grammar mistakes but I think you can understand me YOU and YOUR STORY
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