Reviews for Tortured Hearts
heather.boyd chapter 2 . 1/20
Another great chapter...
heather.boyd chapter 1 . 1/20
I'm liking it so far...
Mrs.NicaLeeSnape chapter 38 . 1/7
Really great story! Read it all one night!
zaubernuss chapter 29 . 12/4/2015
I don't know - but your Hermione seems annoyingly fickle. She immediatly jumps to the conclusion that Snape is a heartless bastard and a true Deatheater for killing Dumbledore, without questioning it or even nurturing the tiniest of doubt after all they had shared. Then, when he attacks her in disguise, scaring the shit out of her for the mere fun of it (instead of just trying to talk to her, what he can even do in her head) and tells her basically nothing (except 'Dumbledore asked me to kill him), she, just like that, jumps into bed with him, again, not doubting any of this in the slightest. (He could be lying, right? After all, she thinks he's a murderer. Why would she believe anything now without any further explanation?) Instead of talking and discussing what is and has been going on, they hop on each other like three minutes after she thought he was going to kill her. And why on Earth doesn't Snape tell her what happend with Dumbledore? Come to think of it - why hadn't he told her even before it happend in the first place? Doesn't make any sense at all, and unfortunately, it doesn't make the characters believable. Sorry, but these logic holes really annoy me in a otherwise nicely written story.
OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
Keep up the good work
RavenclawGal chapter 1 . 10/14/2015
Now in the middle of chapter 2 and it gets
Better and better!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2015
I am only in chapter two yet I already love it!
This is from a girl that s Harry Potter and this is like a new book
RAWRcarrie chapter 16 . 8/28/2015
Hermione was the one that stunned Snape in their third year not Harry! I'm enjoying the story that little detail is annoying the crap outta me though! Read the books.
toukarinluv4ever chapter 38 . 8/11/2015
Absolutely loved it awesome job very much in character keep up the wonderful work
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
I have a few questions. She is blocked by a blocking spell? When she wakes up, it seems only bellatrix and Voldemort are in the room with her, then all of a sudden severus apparates in, so the blocking spell isn't an anti-apparition ward and not placed on the room but somehow on hermione. Why is snape there? Was he summoned? Then it appears draco and Lucius are in the room as well. I suggest you describe the room and everyone in it first, so these appearences aren't so sudden. Is this the second time she's been captured? Does she have the mudblood scar yet? The trio was in the woods and on the run. Where are they? Where is the tent? When and why have the snatchers appeared?
Another question to you: have you read the books yet? This is the reason for all these questions. The books are filled with details, it's what makes them so much greater then the movies. It's also the reason, i, and i'm sure many others are bothered by stories lacking details.
So... Rant over. I hope one day you'll edit the story. I do really like the idea behind it.
Martionmanswife chapter 3 . 1/11/2015
ok.. I can see me spending a bit reading this.
riskeybusiness chapter 38 . 9/10/2014
Seemed a bit rushed in that last chapter. But absolutely adored the story. Wonderfully written :)
Sassyluv chapter 38 . 9/10/2014
I loved it... One question, did they end up having more kids? You have awesome style and I really enjoyed this story :)
Sassyluv xxx
Guest chapter 38 . 7/28/2014
This was a great story. Thank you.
Lunabeegood chapter 8 . 4/22/2014
I like his callus nature and her awkwardness
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