Reviews for Tortured Hearts
Martionmanswife chapter 3 . 1/11
ok.. I can see me spending a bit reading this.
riskeybusiness chapter 38 . 9/10/2014
Seemed a bit rushed in that last chapter. But absolutely adored the story. Wonderfully written :)
Sassyluv chapter 38 . 9/10/2014
I loved it... One question, did they end up having more kids? You have awesome style and I really enjoyed this story :)
Sassyluv xxx
Guest chapter 38 . 7/28/2014
This was a great story. Thank you.
Lunabeegood chapter 8 . 4/22/2014
I like his callus nature and her awkwardness
Lunabeegood chapter 5 . 4/21/2014
I love this idea
Lunabeegood chapter 3 . 4/21/2014
Love it so fat
Lunabeegood chapter 2 . 4/21/2014
Love it so far
Lunabeegood chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
Great start!
Darque Hart chapter 31 . 4/2/2014
You should have stuck more to your original story. I enjoyed reading the story until you started leaning too much on Rowling. Your original idea should have been the forefront of the story; the most important part of the story. By chapter 30 you let it fall into the background as filler. I've already read Rowling.
Jessica chapter 38 . 4/1/2014
i loved your story! Yoh should check out these snape/hermione videos! Theyre not mine but are still amazing! user/amchoupiegirl
Evranu chapter 38 . 3/21/2014
I loved your story. The ending was perfect :)
medea chapter 5 . 3/20/2014
this story is like a bad copy of the fanfic "bound to him" by georgesgurl117(published in 2011, so i wonder if you've read this before writing your story?)
"your" hermione acts like a stupid child...your writing is lame..sorry i'm just honest.
hippononymous chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
Mugblood? You're an idiot. If you're going to write a story, at least make sure you can spell things from the books correctly.
mama123 chapter 15 . 3/10/2014
Ilikr ur story so far, but I confess that its really bothering me that herms is being tortured by various sources toooooo much. Uvr treating her like a villian who paying for hos evik deeds! I hope u have mercy on her soon! I m also annoyed that she is acting a bit immature. She acted more mature in her second year than now. Its not snapes should show more gratitude, not repulsion! Other than this its quite up the good work; )
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