|Reviews for To Be A Malfoy|
| Guest chapter 39 . 9/14
The writing was alright and there were some spelling or grammatical errors (which is completely normal) but my biggest problem was that Isobelle got so freaking annoying. It felt like she should've been diagnosed with Bipolar disorder but you didn't expand on that at all other than her obnoxious internal debate and the one trip to the healer. You made a point to have Pansy make the comment that Hermione got pregnant by Draco on purpose but you didn't even bother explaining the why and how that happened. This wasn't Dramione, so much as teenaged filled drama. You elaborated too much on filler and didn't focus enough on the important details of the plot. Why did Hermione try to get pregnant by Draco, why would she leave her daughter with her "mortal enemy" especially when she was bullied by him for being a lesser person when she was younger, what happened after Astoria was released from Azkaban, because of how you portrayed her, I doubt she would've just left them be. I feel like so many questions were left unanswered in 39 chapters and there was no buildup, just filler and for that reason, I did not enjoy the story as much as I could have. I'm very sorry that this sounds kind of harsh, and I'm really not trying to be, but I was incredibly disappointed with how this turned out. This story had potential and unfortunately, I was very disappointed that I feel like I wasted my time reading a story that didn't feel like it had a point.
| MeraRavenclaw chapter 6 . 8/26
is ginny going to make an appearance
| Michy.Sweetness chapter 40 . 7/28
Reading this story brought me to tears in every few chapters because of what Isobelle went through and I must say it definitely captures the ups and downs of what a child goes through with not having both parents together. I really enjoy reading this story. Keep up the good work. Thank you️
| shadowfax00 chapter 8 . 7/19
Wow. This is so unrealistic. Why is isobelle sounding so nonchalant about her mother's reasons for abandoning her? If Draco didn't adopt her, she was going to give her up to strangers. And it took her 14 and two kids of her own to even contemplate meeting her daughter? Any normal human being would have been shattered at the pensive memory. Imagine living and craving a mother and finally getting yo know just how little it took for her to abandon you. All that angst and hatred would have turned her into someone who hated her mother. But here, despite everything, you've made a 14 year old teenager into some sort of Zen Master. Ridiculous. I dropping this. I don't think I can EVER forgive Hermione for doing what's she did. Its too OOC. If I was isobelle, I would require her to actually DIE for my sake to even contemplate forgiving her.
| fanatic05 chapter 17 . 7/12
"It's okay we can be different" this was a couple of chapters ago but I thought scorpions meeting the Weasley was the cutest thing
| Alisha chapter 28 . 6/2
Okay I know 14 year old girls can be extremely bratty but Isobelle is something else - she is REALLY getting on my nerves! She's constantly up and down saying how she loves Hermione and then suddenly she's "getting too comfortable too quick"? Unless you diagnose her with bipolar later on in the story I really don't know how I feel about her so far.
| MeAFanficAddict chapter 40 . 5/23
Oh wow this is just awesome
and amazing as always. I m so happy that you have added extra chapters to this wonderful stories. Thank you!
I loved it. wanna know what will happen when nine kids will be living in one home. lets see if draco and Hermione's vacations go as smoothly as it seems.
waiting for your update!
| arlyetta chapter 5 . 5/23
Oh, god, that is a horrible situation. I'm crying.
| Guest chapter 30 . 5/22
I don't know why I keep reading this. Everyone is so annoying that I want slap all of them.
| Ghost00 chapter 29 . 3/10
Ahhhh I want to know what happened at the valentines day ball, like a one shot?
| MeAFanficAddict chapter 1 . 2/2
i always love this story
| dramione3 chapter 1 . 1/5
| MeAFanficAddict chapter 35 . 1/3
every time I read this story I get a strange satisfaction in knowing that there is someone who is like me. or I should say have the same thinking like me. its just that I love this story and don't know why (apart from the wonderful writing and beautiful plots & characters). I feel very emotionally attached to this fic. the reason for this can be that this fic shows the typical teenage temper and how difficult it is to understand teens. at the same time it is also very important to understand them...then there is extremes and breaking points in this fic that we think that we do but don't actually experience in daily life...
in total I am in love...with this fanfiction and the author
| Guest chapter 32 . 1/3
yes it was very inevitable...
| Guest chapter 28 . 1/3
I HATE VICTORIE!