Reviews for Welcome To Chicago, Motherfckr!
animeloverxxxx chapter 16 . 2/3
that was beautiful TT A TT loved it aaahhh feels 333
animeloverxxxx chapter 8 . 2/3
Awesooommee love it! :D
animeloverxxxx chapter 7 . 2/3
Ahhh i got so fucking happy when i saw there are more chapters this is beautiful xxx 33
animeloverxxxx chapter 3 . 2/3
i love this fanfic so much, you've captured john and punk perfectly and their so cute together eek u
love the story chapter 38 . 3/10/2014
I love the story keep it up next time can you do alberto delrio/john cena
Guest chapter 46 . 8/3/2013
Wait wait did i read this right randy is back
KellyK200769 chapter 51 . 5/10/2013
Excellent story, you are forgiven for making Randy into a total bastard. Glad I was able to read more, and It kept me up all night to finnish but I just could not put down the laptop. Love triangles are horrible on the person that is in the middle and has to make a decision that is almost impossible at the time. You dont want to hurt either of the 2 that you are choosing over and it makes you do totally irrational things, You made John very believable in that, even though I wanted to slap him every time he was in the same room with Randy. Ok, now off to bed, I need to wait to start the next installment.
KellyK200769 chapter 29 . 5/9/2013
Poor Randy? Screw Randy, Randy is an ass. I would have kicked his ass, even though he still is a hottie.
KellyK200769 chapter 21 . 5/9/2013
Ok calmed down, still pissed at both of them but as in the Queen song, " the show must go on".
KellyK200769 chapter 19 . 5/9/2013
Not only do I hate Randy right now, I cant stand John, I think I have to stop reading this story, I am just too pissed off at both of them right now. To evoke suck a strong reaction your doing a great job.
catheryn chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
wow! this story was great! i loved it! for your first chapter story, you did really great! i really liked all the twists and turns. you definitely kept me guessing. i liked how you added some centon in there too, i really like centon. i bet the baby is going to be really cute...and i'm really happy their engaged! can't wait to see what happens in the next part.
MissElizabeth64 chapter 51 . 12/29/2012
Wow, when I saw that this fic had so many favorites, I totally thought that it would be as great as the other fics with as many favorites, but I was totally wrong. I don’t know if people were being super nice or were afraid that you would bully them in your next author’s note, but I don’t know what they saw that was so “awesome” or “amazing” in this fic. Are you sure you watch these guys every Monday night, because you totally got their personalities all wrong. John Cena is not wimpy and Punk is not that much of an asshole. The relationship wasn’t even realistic! I suffered through this entire fic thinking that at some point it had to get better for it to have so many favorites, but it never did.

You don’t deserve to have the same number or more favorites than amazing writers like slaygirl190, luvcmpunk314, HeartDeNjis, Miss Toughie, and Xenarocks99. Thank you and have a nice day!
appolo1214 chapter 40 . 12/3/2012
Lets say if I made out with my friend, drugged or not I'd probably dig myself a hole, crawl into it and stay there until the world ends. Poor guys. Hopefully, Jeff and Punk will remain close friends. Shit happens Jeff! You don't have to worry over this chapter Jay, I liked it. I feel bad for Beth though. Poor women. I read this chapter the same night I read the last chapter:D I've only a few more to read. Almost near there bb. Almost there:-)
appolo1214 chapter 39 . 12/3/2012
I read this chapter two nights ago on my phone, but couldn't review. I was avoiding my Mom all night. ughh. This was confusing as fuck. I was already fuming before I started reading this and the end of this chapter only made my mood worse. Not complaining though. Since I couldn't yell at mom I was yelling at Jeff and Punk.I was pissed at Matt, Jeff, Punk, not at John though. lol. Can never get mad at him:D Good job on this chapter. You built the suspense very well, not to mention it was creepy as hell. Anyway, I kinda enjoyed it too. As much as it was creepy, I mean admit it how would ya feel if everyone around ya suddenly starts acting like crazy? It was also sorta funny, and I got to see some Junk... Junk man. You know how much I love Junk:P
appolo1214 chapter 38 . 11/24/2012
I don't know what to think of this chapter. I mean it started off John whining to Punk, and them getting on doing naughty stuff. Lmao. And then some hot sex, well usually when I read sex scenes in most stories, I usually go Eww and skip reading those parts altogether. As you know I don't like to read a lot of smut, but when you write it I'm like glued to the computer. Anyway, everything was alright until that part...that part where John bit on Punk's...eh Dick? Lmfao. That was fucking hilarious. I was laughing so hard, I'm surprised my Mom didn't wake up. It's 3am dude. Lesson learned, never bite a man's dick :P Then came the part where everything just turned to be a nightmare for both guys. This chapter was epic. I felt so many emotions, and I hope this review is doing you justice.
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