|Reviews for Best Day Ever|
| Re Demeta chapter 1 . 3/29
Hey. I have to Say, I really like this story, and truly believe (and hope) that you could turn it into a larger story. You-know not begging or anything.
| Bob Zox chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Whoa! It WAS intense! You are officially a Fluff Master! Well done!
| Anthony1l chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
| Arkie chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
That's really funny in a way
| BlackRobin7 chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
i like this one better and i like the battle in bens mind. but in these storys it gwen never seemes very suprized.
| sableye chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
This story was very good.
It was sad that Kevin would cheat on Gwen.
It was very good that Ben and Gwen had a happy ending.
Keep up the good work.
| doc boy chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
It was kinda cute though i was hoping there would be a confession or something. But i think there should have been a little base for the love thing though. I have two sugestions for you. One is to try to work on grammer and poncuation a liitttle bit. You sometimes use the wrong words or use a ? instead of . like in the story 'thanks ben'. my other sugestion to you is to try to make the POV thing a little less confusing. With the grammer problems it's sometimes hard to know who you're talking about. I would advice you too try to make it lless confusing if or if you want to, you can try sometthing diferent. Again i'm not trying to manipulate, I'm juust trying to help. It's your call
| General KJ chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Haha cute... Kevin's such a dick :D