Reviews for Sexual Desire
KlamonKlefan chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
Please updated. I've been reading this story since you first posted and have been waiting for updates ever since. I really want to see Damon and Kol go on a date. I think it would be so adorable.
vanessa.lizana.75 chapter 6 . 2/20/2014
in the date they could talk about random things about them self and in that moment when everything is perfect damon ask something to call.: "I want to ask you something and i dont know how to do it so i just gonna sey right now-" but before he even get to ask the question, kol smirk and tell him "You dont have to ask for sweet heart i know what you want"
Damon: Really? that was easy so what do you say my sexy ass?
But kol never tell a word, because he go to the table and in that moment he unbutten the pant of damon and he start to suck his cock where damon only at firt get nervous but when it beging to be good and pleasure he only moans and say "O baby keep sucking the cock like is a lolipop. yeah you bad boy i gonna make you spread that legs of you tonight... o baby that fucking good" where damon get a call from jeremy who tell him that the expencie ring who he buy for kol is now stuck in his finger and he is now in the restaurant where he start to ask where is kol? and why he have that look of exitent and that he should calm down a little bit
Jeremy: He is gonna be you boyfriend damon. Do not worring. in that moment jeremy feel a noise from down of the table. Tired of damon's worring he takes his hand and pull him over to stand up when he no only him find that he has a erection , the people of the restaurent are now know about his "businnes" and before he get to explain him self, kol stand up saying yes to damon and fogerting about all the looks of the people the kiss
vanessa.lizana.75 chapter 7 . 2/20/2014
please update soon
and make damon jealous when the fight because kol believe that he is still in love with elena and damon never say a word leaving a very sad and crying kol who goes to the grill when he get a flirt by a hot guy so when matt see that, he call damon telling him about the guy who want a piece of ass of his lover so he goes to the grill and start to make a scene where he hit the guy saying that kol is his possesion and no one is allow to touch any part of his sweet body and in that moment he tell this to everyone in the grill that if someone ever try again a way on kol they are no gonna see the sun again
and in that moment he takes the hand of kol who is shout and screaming at damon for the scene and in that right moment damon let his dominance take his head and kiss in a very possessive way where they go home and have angry sex
Guest chapter 7 . 12/29/2013
Please write another chapter
Guest chapter 7 . 10/15/2013
Are you done updating
NateBuzzLover.5 chapter 7 . 8/19/2013
Please Update this is awesome and so steamy I love it . I think Kol should go on a four or five dates and Kol should purposely turn damon on to test him can't wait to read another chapter :)
Katie chapter 7 . 7/3/2013
Make it three dates and totally make Damon jealous cause that would be funny to read and the should tell stories of their lives
coyotemoonmistress chapter 7 . 5/7/2013
That can't be it, more more! Encore! This is so cute, haven't read one like this before.
pyrolover3 chapter 6 . 3/19/2013
pyrolover3 chapter 7 . 3/19/2013
Give it 2 dates where Kol tells Damon why he won't just put out. ( I recommend abuse relationship pre-original). Have Damon be his usual cocky self with a hint of romance. First dates are awkward, nobody really knows what to talk about. Stick to simple stuff like favorite things and activities. I would also recommend Kol killing someone who looked at Damon to show that he's paranoid of being alone and he just wants to feel wanted. That would be a great chapter name for their first time. It probably will be the first time Kol has ever felt wanted. Damon can go all out for their first time. Flowers, candles, cliche mood music. That's it for my brilliance. I hope it helps you!
seddielover1311 chapter 7 . 6/22/2012
UPDATE SOON! I love this and want to see the kamon date!
Lestatian chapter 7 . 6/3/2012
Lol Kol should make Damon wait at least two dates. Sounds like you've got a number of ideas for the date chapter! And more Klaus and Stefan plz
klefan chapter 7 . 6/2/2012
you should have Damon, take Kol out to a lake, set up a fancy picnic, italian food of coarse, then in the next chapter do Stefan and Klause on a date, going into the bathroom and doing it then and there, and for Damon and Kol, have them go on 2 dates before Kol gves him anything.
FullMoonOrchid chapter 7 . 5/30/2012
Your Klefan is very HOT ! I adore this.
Smile or Go to Jail chapter 7 . 5/29/2012
OMG! Klaus is so perv! lol. I laugh every lines. The klefan\dakol chapter are probably the bes! I love it.
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