Reviews for Star in Your Sky |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please come back and finish this. How are they going to stop James and resolve everything? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! Hope everything is well with you! It would be wonderful if you could come back and finish this great story! It's been over a year! Kat |
![]() ![]() ![]() Didn’t he tell her about their severed bond? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh! I cannot believe that after reading 87 chapters and with one to go, this story os still incomplete! It is so frustrating, and so so good! I wished I had checked before starting… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh-oh. Sounds like a trap |
![]() ![]() ![]() I keep wondering when a new chapter will be here— :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Blessed be! That was fantastic! Yeah Edward... you were holding out on our girl! My heart hurts for Edward. I hope he can get the bond back to the way it was, despite what Renee said. I hope (and I suspect I may be right) that Bella blows the doors off both her mother & grandmother's powers. Can't wait for more! HMU when you're free, I'm happy to support you in any way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You got it just right, I'd say! What a fantastic reunion! You know... it's fantastic that you're in the medical field. I mean... it is a necessary service to the world that not many are capable of or willing to do, but I'm telling you... you would make an absolutely fantastic screenwriter... or director. Seriously. I've said it before and I'll say it again. This story could be a movie, easy peasy. And an epic one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmmmm... I know someone who broke a mating bond. And someone who had their's partially broken... Will James show up? I wonder I wonder and then... hot damn the shit will htf! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Almost to the end. I really love how prescient Didyme was. She truly was an Oracle. I'm excited for this setup as it feels like something big is on the horizon! And I'm wondering what Bella is up to? What has she learned? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wanted to pop in to let you know that I'm reading again! :D. It really is like one of those movies that you can just watch over and over and over again whenever it comes on. In fact, I was just thinking to myself a few chapters ago how utterly FANTASTICALLY this fic would translate to the big screen and I sat there for a good few minutes longing, PINING really, for that reality. Sigh. I wouldn't be satisfied changing it to an original story, even though like 90% of this thing is original stuff. I suppose I could be swayed... and I have no doubt you could do it. Your talent knows no bounds. Honestly, I feel like such a lazy, sheltered, American. I don't know how you fit everything into your days and STILL manage to craft such flawless, endlessly entertaining material. It boggles the mind. Anyway, I know I've been MIA for a hot minute, so thought I'd give you a little shout. Saw the recent updates and rather than try to remember all the details, figured I'd just treat myself to the joyride again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Communication is key. Great chapter and enjoy the vacation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so I'm rereading and I remember a lot of the original plot so I remember when the story was told if their separation and her going to the singers... but I'm pretty sure it was missing from the rewrite of the story. this time around is flowing MUCH smoother and easier to follow tho! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love vacations for you since I get these babies. I've never had a vacation so I can be on one with these chapters. Thank you! |