|Reviews for Waiting Outside The Lines|
| Adriana Espan chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Aww so sweet and cute :3
| pinkus-pyon chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
linda historia :D
| AnimeGrl2519 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
That is nice and cute oneshot :)
| Koyuki11 chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
I like how in this story, eight-year-old Hibari isn't the dangerous prefect that will bite you to death like how I see in other fanfics. I always find it interesting to see in fanfics that young Tsuna is not afraid of Hibari, but when they grow up, Tsuna has a rational fear of him.
I wonder where Namimori High is? They never really showed it. Wow, I wonder who beat Hibari? And Tsuna came to the rescue! Did Hibird lead Tsuna to Hibari because that bird is so useful.
Tsuna is waiting outside the lines for Hibari, and Hibari is also waiting outside the lines for Tsuna as his Cloud Guardian. How sweet. I can see their friendship develop, and the meaning of Tsuna's words was finally revealed since I also didn't know what it meant.
| Minnesota Fireball Wolf chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
This is really cute! I'm excited to read more of your stuff now!
| Little D. Xylie chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
It was very sweet...
The idea of Kyouya and Tsuna as childhood friends is very intriguing. I might do one myself. :D
| Xxferessa-TanXx chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
oooowwww so sweet
| long live marshmallows chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
ahaha! Waiting outside the lines... mm! That's interesting! Although I think you might've been in a rush and missed this one:
Even if everyone else rejects him, he'll be THE ONE WAITING for him outside the circle of rejection and into his welcoming arms.
that's it for me!
| xXHalfPrinceXx chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
This story is so cute! I loved reading about how their friendship grew and developed .