|Reviews for Substance|
| Cac chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
Why is he apologizing while sexually harassing her?
| Collaborative Lady chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
I really like Bolin's painful uncertainty. Gosh. the pain. And a disconnected timeline just WORKS, somehow.
| HotWolfGirl chapter 4 . 3/17/2013
are you going to continue this?
| Thebeanster171 chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
| rayeveryday chapter 3 . 9/18/2012
I can't remember if I've reviewed this already but anywho
Korra and Bolin are SO in character it's ridic.
And this line:
"I'm not that kind of girl." She rounds on him, feeling the need to defend herself.
"Never thought you were." He says and her fire dies before it ever really got started.
I LOVE that line. It keeps echoing in my head, dude.
| FrostyxLioness chapter 4 . 7/5/2012
I love the idea of Bolin and Korra together
Your story is entertaining and I enjoy the limes and lemons. Keep it coming!
| AnonymousNavi chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Oh my heart. I love how you wrote the both of them. Korra was a lovely balance of her usual dominate self and that a bit of vulnerability that makes her so wonderfully human.
| lucawindmover chapter 4 . 7/2/2012
I love how the chapters aren't in order so the reader is left piecing things together. You do this well and it really works. I can tell you know how all the pieces fit beforehand. There is no inconsistency. Good work. I hope to read more of this in the future.
| Prnyctina1091 chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
i love borra so much and this just makes me sooo happy. thank you soo much for this. seriously. xD
| lucawindmover chapter 3 . 7/2/2012
I don't even have words for how great this is. You have a gift.
| lucawindmover chapter 2 . 7/2/2012
And we all do LOVE Bolin eyebrow waggles, don't we. Le sigh. You make me want a Bolin for my very own.
| lucawindmover chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Just wow. Just wonderfully wow. I'm so glad to finally see someone do this pairing justice. Good work.
| Cooked Sashimi chapter 3 . 6/30/2012
these are beautiful, I hope you continue
| DesireAutumn77 chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
So did I have to read this backwards? Because I don't know why, it just seems way out of order... Sorry to have bothered you :)
| onefinemorning chapter 3 . 6/27/2012
oh man i hope you post more :3