Reviews for The Time Traveler and the Queen
Archangel Change24 chapter 9 . 9/25/2023
So my biggest problem with this fanfiction is that harry’s magic is MUCH stronger than this. Throw in that those potions were supposed to be the equal to a grenade. Why they didn’t just use the explosive vials at the tips of arrows i DON’T understand but what i do know is that Harry knows explosive spells and is a powerhouse when it comes to magic he should have NO problem beating thr telmarines.
lord of the east chapter 14 . 7/10/2023
This fic is amazing!
AvidReader2425 chapter 3 . 8/20/2022
Pretty good overview
AvidReader2425 chapter 2 . 8/20/2022
Thanks for the chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 1 . 8/20/2022
Enjoyable opening chapter
Guest chapter 13 . 6/5/2022
For the record, the name was Mr. Tumnus, not Taumus.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/5/2022
"If you had a chance to kill your father's killer, would you?" Harry looked at Caspian with a critical eye.

"It depends how bad your emotions over ride your senses. I had my chance but I let him live."

"Why?"

"I didn't think my father would've wanted his best friends to become killers. I didn't have to stop them. But I didn't want to sink to his low level. He took the cowards way out."

Voldemort would be the killer of his father (and mother obviously), not Pettigrew.

Pettigrew (and Snape, but obviously Harry doesn't know about his involvement in their deaths at this point) would just be a betrayer.
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 15 . 10/7/2019
A great story here!
Oddballzebra chapter 2 . 7/18/2019
What the fuck is this shit?
cshen.julienne chapter 15 . 4/20/2018
Hey this is a good read :)
ruth hammond chapter 15 . 11/14/2017
Thank you for your work...
ruth hammond chapter 13 . 11/14/2017
Evil, Evil writer..I will have top finish this and then go on to the rest of your stories...
ruth hammond chapter 12 . 11/14/2017
Wonderful! smile! Cheers!
ruth hammond chapter 11 . 11/14/2017
Been doing great. This is in response to the AN[author's note] for chapter 12...btw, loving your notes. I should have done this before, but the story is so much fun. I have read some mention of school...tests and trying to get things done on time and not mess your school work...Pay attention to the school work and then the writing. It is more important in that order until you have a break...we, the readers can wait even if we complain or mutter your way, this is your future. Writing is wonderful and we enjoy your work, we can wait...sound like a teacher?guess what...retired for years and I wish I had some of the authors that write for fanfiction for my students way back then... I will tell you this, as I have told authors here, many of you show such promise for the future writers if for nothing else than your and our enjoyment. I know of several of your fellow authors that are as good as and better than some of the famous authors today. Back to the reading, I've got to get some sleep before a long trip later today. 3:17 AM Nov. 14, 2017
ruth hammond chapter 2 . 11/13/2017
I read all the Narnia stories when in college and after, when our children were old enough, we read them to the kids and when the grand kids came along our son read them to the boys and our daughter-in-law, and so the road goes on. Enjoyed the summary, you did a good job of including and deleting...hard to do a good job of that. I look forward to the rest of the story...
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