|Reviews for Rescuing Harry|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/6
Have you ever thought of adding to this story? It is one of my favorite. Makes for a good begining of a soul bond story.
| oliver chapter 1 . 1/7
very nice story I seen you have not updated or started any other stories since early 2013 which is sad I hope you return soon
| Gracealma chapter 1 . 1/5
Love it. People who care about Harry:)
| nayin17 chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
oh wow! wish this is longer
| FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
you made me cry with that last bit! :') poor Harry! Loved this story :))))
| Alex Lilly Potter chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
please write more
| Inferius1957 chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
This was such a wonderful story, almost a shame it was just a single chapter.
Anyways, I'll add this to my story favs, again well doen.
| Mommy3 chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
This was a great one-shot, thanks!
| Harrypotter9010 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
This Story is Awesome!
| area808code chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
I really enjoyed reading this story. I hope you update.
| horsegirl275 chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
This is really good! Please contiune! I'm assuming this is a soul bond fic, and a very good one at that! Please update!
| Arithmetic13 chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Such a sad, wonderful story. You could easily continue it into a soul bond story if you wish.
| Oglo123 chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Awesome story! Please continue it.
| insaneharry chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
I loved your story but instead of a one-shot I think you should continue it.
| Runos chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
A very good story, as always your imagery and ability tcinque the reader feel included in the action is superb. In terms of styling my favourite parts were how you blended Harry and Ginny's "mind" speak with Ginny's conversation with Molly. It sounded right and flowed completely naturally, which is more than I can say for the majority of the 'soul-bond' type stories I come accross. Molly's reaction was well written, with dismissal at first flowing into concern and eventually Ginny brings her round. Good flow of events and character development which made it feel very realistic.
I would have liked to see a bit more development on Harry and Ginny's relationship, it just feels like the connection came from nowhere and is too sudden. There is an explanation that I exists, but not enough development; you get told it's there and BAM!, things are already happening. I just felt it needed more embellishment, more how they felt about it, etc. It just doesn't sit well as it is, it feels like the bond is there solely to create a very specific situation, which it is, but could have been masked and turned into a theme for the fic more effectively. I suppose that's the issue with a one-shot though, there isn't a lot of time for build up. However it wasn't too badly done considering the restraints.
The court scene was well written, and didn't sound over the top or anything. All the characters act as your would intuit they would, so everything feels in its place and fits. The only bit I was unsure of was Vernon, I couldn't see him acting as he did - he always acts in his best interest and I didn't think he wood over react in court wher whe would face severe punishment. But then again, taken to a very magical area to be charged with something he did to combat magic, he might well be unbalanced.
I wonder how Harry will go at Hogwarts, being sperated from Ginny and this time knowing about Magic? And I wonder just how far Dumbledore would go to get him back under his (not so) watchful eye? I would think it a good launching place to start a multi-chapter fic, but the again, it checks all the boxes for the summary so perhaps it is fine as is. Either way I think it works well.
In all, a beautiful, well written story as always. Well done and thank you.
I hope moving and all went well and perhaps we will see more updates soon. Thanks!