Reviews for Doomwing
ShadeLivesForever chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
I can just comprehend this story, but otherwise it seems as though you have not followed the tips I have provided. I am not saying that you have to; doing so is only for the sake of improving the story, or stories, that you have written. Secondly, all of these "sequels" can be put into one story by using chapters, and the chapters can be named as you have named your sequels here. These ideas of yours are interesting though and I would like to see more of them. _