|Reviews for The Rest|
| Frakking Toasters chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
Excellent ending for Chet. I love a little revenge. And I loved this follow up story. I love how you can approach this theme from different angles and always make it so gripping, and real and basically full of feels. xo
| ccase13 chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
This was really scarey when it turned out to be a haunting and not PTSD. They should probably burn the whole house to make sure.
| monkeymuse chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
I would love to see a fic like this with dean as the one hurt. Since Sam could help him out
| Vivat Leah chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
It's a great ending to the trilogy :D. A hope for the best, what more could we wish for.
Thanks for writing it, it would be just insanely sad if Sammy didn't have at least a semi-happy ending after everything that happened to him.
| melitta4ever chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Yeay! Thanks for the absolutely wonderful ending.
| 3DBABE1999 chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
okay I know this is redundant ( especially from me) ... BUT ... I LOVED IT! ... I want another part to this please ... It's a VERY GOOD story!
| Grettigirl123 chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Great ending to this series. It was a chilling verse, but very well done. I'm glad to see Chet finally taken down, and it was wonderful that it was done by his own victims. Wonderfully imaginative. Thanks! Gretti
| Cainchan chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Hey my dear Menthol Pixie. How are you doing? I am not in the Supernatural fandom anymore (BBC Sherlock captured my interest) because I hated how the tv-show was not about the brothers anymore but about angels and Destiel and it was really painful to watch that. So I only read your wonderful, incredibly sad Missing verse stories yet. You definitely could write such a story – I knew it. I knew it. This story is simply fantastic and so heartbreaking. Everything is brilliantly written in this verse and you capture the characters very well. Especially Sammy, who had to endure so much and is so brave and good and tries to go one although it must be hard to cope with such a terrible ordeal, which he had to endure. Being captured and abused sexually is one of the worst things what could happen to a person and Sam was always so sensitive and so trusting in people and now he seems so skittish and scared and I want to hug him and wrap him in cotton wool and never let anyone hurt him again. I also always thought that Sam was struggling with an eating disorder when he was younger, he seems to never eat because he enjoys it, he only does it because he has to and he was so terrible skinny at the beginning of SPN (although I loved this young, skinny version of him so much) and also after Jess’s death. I always thing it was not his choice to gain so much muscle and weight but he did it because it was necessary for a hunter. (I would love to read a long Sam eating disorder fic by you – I think you would also handle this delicate topic well. That would be quite wonderful). I really felt with Sam. This whole verse was so depressing and beautiful written and so terrible sad that I had to cry. Such a terrible crime can change everything and you portrayed that very well. Sam will never be the Sam we knew. Sam has changed. You showed us his emotions, his feels and they were so raw and pure and so terrifying. You are indeed a brilliant, brilliant writer. Thank you for sharing those stories around the Missing verse, thank you. Thank you very much, my dear Lady. Thank you.
| KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Always a blast when you post us a story! Thank you.
Loved this part best: The TV screams and Sam looks up. It's a cop drama. Sam recognised the dramatic music of the theme song when it started a few minutes ago, and now a girl is backing up against an alleyway wall, clutching her coat around herself and a man, no more than a shadow, creeps forward. Sam's breath catches.
"xxx," Dean swears from his bed, lunging for the remote and fumbling it. The girl screams again, high pitched and terrified, as the man -
Your words are transformed into emotions - you do this so easily...I stand in aw. Plus you draw me in straight off the bat... Your stories are like the world's strongest magnet! There is no escape...that's a good thing.
Just fantastic work. Powerful!
| ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Awesome third, and final part to the trilogy. Sam's pain and trauma still so raw it's tangible and poor Dean trying hard but unable to help his little brother. Brilliant that you actually had Chet's ghost haunting Sam and them realising they had to go back to the house. And so heartbreaking the control Chet's spirit still had over Sam but great retribution that his other victims got rid of him for good and released themselves in the process. Finally Sam actually talks to Dean and doesn't flinch away from him, now it is over. And totally Dean going to make sure Sam will be okay, and him too.
Such a powerful story, heartrending and traumatic and all the more harrowing as you wrote it so well and it was so real.
So good to see an alert from you in my inbox, I just love your writing.
| AlElizabeth chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Oh. My. God. This was such a good fanfic! Had me almost in tears for most of the time (seriously). I was heartbroken for both boys while I was reading this. You are a superb writer! Perfect ending for this little trilogy. Keep up the amazing work!
| BranchSuper chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Now it's over. Good story.
| SpazticTwitchNinja chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Oh man I don't know what else to say besides this being a perfect ending to this mini-verse.
Sam keeping away from even Dean at the beginning showed how much Sam was messed up and Chet still being able to control Sam was freakishly scary but all his past victims taking him out was the perfect way to gank him.
The part at the very beginning about Sam rotting from the inside out was probably my favorite comparison because it made me cringe.
"(He was too late. Too late and too early and there's no going back now.)" *sob* It all hurts right in the feelings. D:
| sammysdimples chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
I think it's safe to say that I pretty much spazzed out when I saw a notification with your name in my inbox. *squeeee!*
(I think you may know me from my other account, samira parsa, but I've switched to this one-just so you know :))
ON to the review...The descriptions you had of Sam feeling like he was decaying from the inside out were stupendous. They were simple, yet they were so detailed and enlightening.
I felt my gut clench when I read about Dean thinking Sam was dead. I've never really thought about that before...It kind of makes me wish we could have had a glimpse to see what Dean was going through, what he was feeling. (UGH, there is just SO much with this verse/series/thing that could be taken and analyzed and written about. It makes me love it even more!)
The part with the TV show and Sam having those flashbacks makes me want to hug him tight and never let go. My poor baby :( It's not often that Dean can't fix something with Sam, but this definitely falls with that category. My poor freaking boys :( It's so realistic how you have Sam and Dean seeing rape in places they wouldn't even have thought about before. And how Dean's so frantic and embarrassed and rushing to turn it off.
But OH Chet's back! Or, at least the Supernatural Chet is...I never would have suspected that would happen. Nice twist there.
The part with Chet's other victims coming together to destroy him..! Awesome! I think one of my favorite parts was when they were protecting Sam from Chet. Niceeeee :)
What an appropriate, wonderful, gut-wrenching ending. I think it closes up this series rather well, with a certain cloak of finality. This really was beautifully written. I'm anxiously awaiting to read another piece of your work. Keep it up!
...I think I'm going to read this again.
| CeCe Away chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Oh Pix, the emotion in this is so raw and frightening. You always managed to take us right to the deepest places inside the boys. I admire your talent to do that.