|Reviews for Counting the Cost|
| daisiella13 chapter 11 . 5/17/2013
please, please, PLEASE... (pretty please... with a cherry on top...) continue this. it's been MONTHS!
| cassietoevil chapter 11 . 5/17/2013
Oh please continue pretty pretty PLEASE :)
| Nikki Pond chapter 11 . 5/3/2013
Please update this is good, but am not sure if the eleven doctor is visiting the younger version of river
| LadyFfion chapter 11 . 4/7/2013
I really, really love this story so far. It's a really interesting take on the babyfic. I loved the doctor's conversation with Clara.
| Sylva Dax chapter 11 . 1/22/2013
This chapter was excellent. Squeezed my poor heart when River had to come to terms with whether or not the Doctor loved her.
I liked the way you included Clara in the mix too.
| Shaydees chapter 11 . 1/21/2013
Amazing chapter! Thanks for the update.
| Jen chapter 11 . 1/20/2013
I hadn't read any if this fic until tonight. It's good! I'm anxious to see the last chapter
| superlc529 chapter 11 . 1/20/2013
Hmm... something tells me there were a few lines there that are out of order and will eventually come to a complete circle. Clever. Very clever. I absolutely loved Ten II's rant and calling himself thick. I could hear David's voice in my head through all of that. I wonder what he's up to. :P
I also really loved AU Rory and Amy's conversation about the connection they feel to River. I guess that parental instinct is constant throughout every universe.
River's interrogation was pulling at my heartstrings. And just adding to the fact that this River hasn't even been at the Library (obviously) is making me want to cry. Also, it makes me wonder if Clara actually is the Doctor and River's daughter. It would make sense in the Doctor Who way. ;) Love that you brought Clara into the mix, by the way.
That last line of River remembering the Doctor saying something to her that might not have happened to her yet is wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey, isn't it? I have a feeling we'll be reading that line soon. And then within a moment of the Doctor moving the TARDIS with his daughter and his response to Novice Pyrne has my mind coming up with sooo many different scenarios. This story is fantastic! I love it! Post more when you can. DoctorxRiver Forever! :)
| Sylva Dax chapter 10 . 11/7/2012
What monsters! Lower than low to threaten to serve a baby's head on s platter to her mother. What an emotionally charged chapter.
Please update soon.
| LOTR Addict and Whovian chapter 10 . 11/4/2012
Awesome chapter. Please oh please update soon! You should write a book or something. Writing stuff for DW is hard, but you make it look easy!
| ChelGallifreyHookCas221B613 chapter 10 . 11/4/2012
Please update again soon!
| Shaydees chapter 10 . 11/3/2012
Loving this story! So glad you updated.
| kathy-poison chapter 10 . 11/3/2012
Aw, this was so sweet (the end bit). the rest of it was just plain awesome! :)
| superlc529 chapter 10 . 11/3/2012
Wonderful update. I'm so glad you got the chance to update. You know, I do think it was smart of Pete to do that. Sometimes things like that need to be done to help the Doctor (or in this case Ten II) without him even knowing it. Damn those people are evil... good for River kicking him where the sun don't shine. :P I'm sure Amelia, Rory, Pete, Rose, and the Doctor's duplicate will keep River's daughter safe. :)
One thing that I'm a little confused on is the scene where the Doctor is holding his daughter in the hospital, getting all sentimental (I loved that, by the way, so heart-warming), is that supposed to take place after everything that's happened in Pete's World? Or before she goes to Pete's World? Is it timey-wimey or is that even them? My conspiratory brain is running wild. :P Anyway, great update. I hope you'll be able to post more soon. :)
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/31/2012
More please! this is a great story :)