Reviews for The Worst Monster
RawrItsLiv chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Very good beginning! The second line got me hooked! I can't wait to see where you take this :D

For next chapter maybe try breaking up the text a little? I found it a bit hard to read when it's in this solid wall. Also, try to remember where your characters are so your next event makes sense.

Good job! :)