Reviews for Virtual Reality
rickastro chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
good prologue
FusingFaller2002 chapter 2 . 4/28/2014
Oh my gosh... Keep on going also if your taking requests my character was called Zeke Thunderstone it would be nice if you could bring him back by maybe having him see them at one point but maybe only once
three-day-stephano chapter 2 . 4/4/2013
brokn24ever chapter 2 . 11/8/2012
I love how well written this is. Please write more soon I would love to see them meet courage and Finn. :)
rickastro chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
i liked it that's one of the type of fanfics that i rarely see not because i dont want it's because i can't find them a favorite and a follow to both of you and i mean story and author
mxdnxghtlxve chapter 2 . 6/18/2012
Zo Lynn chapter 2 . 6/13/2012
I very much enjoyed this. Unlike many other fanfictions, you had almost perfect grammar, spelling, and punctuation. The story is interesting, and doesn't feel like it's going too fast. Please keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing more!
Zachary M. Wish chapter 2 . 5/29/2012
This sounds like a good story so far. For me, I can't wait to see your oc's reaction when talking to FF characters. Goodluck with the next chapter.