Reviews for Wolf Trap english version
buggleston chapter 11 . 6/21/2012
Loved the chosen method to get rid of the cooler.(LOL) Our favorite Demolitions man sadded because he didn't get to to the fireworks go off,HAPPY to see this stage of the plan go the team but now Hogan has more to deal with in the tunnels below. Wonderful chapter that lived up to its name and definitely Heroes style! Cannot wait to see what happens next?
ColHogan chapter 11 . 6/21/2012
Great chapter. Looks like Hogan's plan right now is working like a charm. And Carter was so adorable with being upset that he didn't get to see the explosion. That's our Carter. Now to get rid of Eberhart which I'm sure will be no easy task, and a lot can happen in forty-eight hours.
buggleston chapter 10 . 6/19/2012
The story gets better as they are posted and its a real treat!

loved the part where Newkirk dis appers so they can kidnap the generalReally laughed when LeBeau scared Newkirk instead and oh the scene with Carter was Fabulous ! Lookout it's the quiet ones that will surprise you like Carter when he started defending Newkirk to Lackey a captain of all people .Poor Schultz they almost got him in trouble AGAIN!
Abracadebra chapter 10 . 6/19/2012
Very entertaining chapter, with lots of nice little gestures that help tell the story. (LeBeau's backhand across Newkirk's stomach seemed to be straight from the show... Newkirk sticking his head up to give a little wave of the hand - these little movements really help tell the story!)

I have to congratulate you on your chapter headings, which are clever, playful, and contribute very effectively to framing the action in each installment of the story.
ColHogan chapter 10 . 6/19/2012
This General Eberhart is a real piece of work. Hogan might have to regroup where this General is concerned especially since he did something Hogan didn't plan on. And him thinking Hochstetter might be right about some of the 'goings on' at Stalag 13 does not bode well if he brings his suspicions to Wolfie. Loved how Newkirk gave the Gestapo a run for their money for awhile.
buggleston chapter 9 . 6/17/2012
Wonderful informative chapter! happy to see that Newkirk faced Lackey all for the sake of Colonel Hogan ,the team and especially the current important mission even though that turned out badly because of Lackey's goading.

Really happy to see Newkirk finnaly tell the Colonel what had happen in the pass and about Mason. I really detest Lackey now!NOW I really hope that Hogan can keep the fine line between his Corporal and Lackey now that his plan is falling into place!
St PA chapter 9 . 6/17/2012
Looking forward to the rest of the story. Thank you for updating often and quickly - makes waiting for the next update less frustrating and thought continuity more enjoyable. To be honest, I enjoy reading the completed story at one sitting (if possible, since some are extremely lengthy) or skipping around to the chapters I enjoy more than others. Just like picking up a book, the ability to move around at will to savor the suspense, drama, and humor is priceless.
ColHogan chapter 9 . 6/17/2012
Poor Newkirk. To be carrying that guilt around in him over young Josh and what happened to him.I'm glad he finally told Hogan about the theft of the money and how he covered for Josh. And I now hate Lackey even more. It was good that Hogan told Newkirk he knew the Corporal didn't steal the money and that he still wanted him on his probably goaded Newkirk into attacking 's hoping Hogan can maintain the delicate line between Newkirk and Lackey to carryout the mission.
Abracadebra chapter 8 . 6/16/2012
I have been meaning to post reviews, but real life keeps taking up all my time! This story continues to impress me on many levels - the intricacy of the story line, the building tension, the twists and turns (more of which are coming based on what I have read of the French version), the psychological and motivational insights, and above all the well paced and compelling storytelling. You seem to inhabit all of the characters with equal ease and insight, and that is really impressive. Thank you for the English translation - even though I know what is coming,the tory has me on the edge of my seat.
buggleston chapter 8 . 6/15/2012
Wonderful chapter! Hogan is livid after he learned what happen! I loved the "Carter Effect" on Hogan with his protectfulness of like the back Story of Mason and Newkirk it helps things fall in place of the anamosity between Newkirk and Captain Lackey! Cannot wait to see what developes between those two next!
ColHogan chapter 8 . 6/15/2012
Hogan is livid and I can't really blame him. Despite how much Lackey deserved it, Newkirk really stepped over the line this time. As one of the men stated to Carter, when the war's over, Newkirk could face serious trouble and that Lackey would see to it. Hogan might not even be able to save his Corporal this time, despite all the good he's done in the operation. Sometimes Newkirk is too hot-headed for his own good. Carter was so adorable the way he kept trying to keep Hogan from leaving the barracks. He knew Hogan was furious and did the only thing he could think of to protect Eberhart certainly is suspicious. Hope he doesn't decide to open one of those 't wait to see what happens.
St PA chapter 7 . 6/13/2012
Thank you for the English translation. I am enjoying the story [especially knowing what's to come]. I originally skipped over Wolf Trap since I can't read French and wondered what the story was about. The mention by a reviewer of an English synopsis at the end of the original version allowed me to take advantage of it. As always, thanks for allowing me the opportunity to review. God Bless.
buggleston chapter 7 . 6/13/2012
Very tense wonderful chapter! glad to see Hogan's plan go off well but who knew what decisions he has to make upon his return! Lackey is a real peice of work to be an officer! I really despise the man!I do not condone what Newkirk did and now he is aware of the conquences!This has angered Colonel HoganI cannot wait to see what will happen to Newkirk next? Thank you both again for another wonderful chapter!
ColHogan chapter 7 . 6/13/2012
I have no sympathy for Lackey whatsoever; but that doesn't mean I condone what Newkirk did. Lackey more than likely provoked Newkirk. And Carter was just adorable. He was so sweet to Newkirk who realized he had done something very bad. But it seems like he was more concerned with what Hogan's reaction would be than his own an angry Hogan is not a pretty sight to see. Can't wait to see what Hogan says and does to Newkirk now.
buggleston chapter 6 . 6/10/2012
The tension is mounting!Lackey is a real piece of work here trying to convince Hogan that Newkirk is worthless! Poor Carter is caught in the middle because of what he heard now he does'nt know how to escape the sitution with his friend ? this background chapter was !
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