Reviews for Betrayed
SortingHat chapter 4 . 8/6
I think you whipped this up really fast on your smartphone.
SortingHat chapter 3 . 8/6
They act more like *rich snobby liberals* that will tout the latest Mac Book Pro just cause they have money to burn.
SortingHat chapter 1 . 8/6
Well in Ocarina of Time you can fight Ganondorf using one of your empty bottles to deflect his spells.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5
Wow, this fanfic stomps on the cannon and then decides to defile the remains. What's the point to this? To show off how "original" and "unexpected" your writing could be? Changing things to be unrecognizable is not the same as being good at writing. Good writers can surprise readers without having to rewrite a good chunk of the source material. On its own, nothing makes sense, from how people react to a kid to the snake ritual to why McGonal hates him.
Lord Kuchiki chapter 17 . 2/2
Loved it
rhizz17 chapter 17 . 2/2
Update please
Reading addict chapter 17 . 1/23
Please please please PLEASE update. I love this story
TheRainyAbe chapter 10 . 1/4
I love the story, but I think there js a mistake. Salazar can't have had a seventh year in Hogwarts, he was a founder fr heavens sake
Fallow53 chapter 17 . 12/26/2016
xxx Kudos xxx : )
Destineyofme chapter 17 . 9/6/2016
This is great please write more in the future
Raziel Fallen chapter 17 . 9/2/2016
Heh he got played~XD
TheOnlyKing chapter 17 . 7/13/2016
This is a pretty good fic even if you haven't updated in a while, I hope that Harry becomes even more evil when he doesn't have any compulsions anymore.
Guest chapter 17 . 7/5/2016
Come on... Work on it... Please... Fans are waiting...
keeperofthevoid chapter 17 . 6/15/2016
You need to update dude
gleefan2009 chapter 17 . 3/19/2016
love it please write more
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