Reviews for Betrayed
Lady Celairiel chapter 16 . 3/3
cool it. please continue
lalo80 chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
Buena historia, actjualiza pronto
imnotraven16 chapter 16 . 11/16/2014
excellent story
Harry Morgan Le Fay chapter 2 . 11/7/2014
Harry Morgan Le Fay chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
Good start.
Harry Morgan Le Fay chapter 16 . 10/31/2014
good chapter. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Harry Morgan Le Fay chapter 5 . 10/31/2014
Harry Morgan Le Fay chapter 4 . 10/31/2014
Good start.
AnimangaLoverFE chapter 16 . 10/26/2014
i really love this story...this new dark harry and his relationship with the slytherins and snape are really maginficent and well-thought...i really like the way harry interacts with voldemort/tom too...i really want to know what happens next so please upload the next chapter soon...
OnPurposeAnon chapter 10 . 10/24/2014
Please, keep the others in your A/N! Super hilarious and entertaining. Potter's snake has a mate? That's brilliant! Especially since it's the Basilisk. Still wanting on more in-depth conversations with his House/what they do. But this isn't mine, and it's brilliant regardless! Look forward to the next chapter.
OnPurposeAnon chapter 7 . 10/24/2014
Love this story! It could use more detailed interactions instead of shortly explaining things by paragraph-but this is how you write, not me! And it's still amazing. Expect more reviews about how much I love your story, (even if you've abandoned it, though hopefully you can still see reviews.)
Great chapter 16 . 10/21/2014
Update soon
oliuytr chapter 16 . 9/24/2014
great story, please continue, will sirius be free?
GhostPepper chapter 5 . 9/23/2014
Love story so far, way better than the books so far for fanfic!
Now I gotta go walk my dog before it gets past 7, can't wait to read next chapter!
GhostPepper chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
Hate them right now, feel bad for Harry but can't wait to see him kick ass!
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