|Reviews for Betrayed|
| Izzy chapter 16 . 3/2
Why is it that all the good stories about him being in Slytherin, are unfinished? Meh. ;-;
| rowenasheir chapter 15 . 2/16
oh please there is no hole.
Tom needs to join up with Marvolo darkmark back again
Marv Reappears in WW and adopts Harry -AD blocked somehow - maybe Lucius helps
Voldy angry with Dursleys and tortures and kills them
Snape shocked as Marvolo removes compulsion
Harry needs to bond with his snake
P/Stone probably a fake?
Destroy AD reputation and Riddle jions Wizgamot as Slytherin
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/21
Seriously...one line monstrousities...
and note pad and ball point pen?
So mundane! WTF?
| 1sunfun chapter 16 . 1/5
| Kaya70 chapter 16 . 12/26/2013
Plz update soon love it
Merry Christmas and a happy New Years
| Tommy14 chapter 16 . 12/19/2013
I'm glad to see you continue this story. Will Harry be talking to Quirrell/LV?
| Olaf74 chapter 16 . 12/11/2013
| Shadeslayer1984 chapter 16 . 12/1/2013
LOVE THIS,BEST HP STORY EVER KEEP WRITING
| TrunksLoneWarrioranimelove chapter 13 . 11/22/2013
I love this. I am gonna read on.
| TrunksLoneWarrioranimelove chapter 5 . 11/22/2013
I like this new Harry very much. I smirked quite a few times while reading this and chuckled a bit. That means I'm enjoying it, which is always a good thing. :D Keep up the great work. I'm writing my own anti-Hogwarts fanfic, only it's different.
| DanielleDaughterOfDeathanMagic chapter 16 . 10/27/2013
This is awesome! Screw the plot holes! Please don't discontinue. Continue or Rewrite but don't discontinue. Or else... ;) :P Have a good day and may the unicorns ever be in your favor!
| timkaylor885 chapter 16 . 10/21/2013
| Angel wolf11021 chapter 16 . 10/14/2013
I love the story and hope to read more soon
| awkwardtaxi chapter 16 . 10/10/2013
You mentioned in one chapter that Morfin had twins, the boy died and the girl was Lily. This was in some chapter after the gringotts one where you implied voldie and lily were twins. Just thought I'd point out that you've already got an alternative to your plot hole issue. As for continuing or not, that's really up to you. I'd recommend against completely rewriting it, as it seems like a lot of times when ppl rewrite things they get a couple of chapters in then just give up for one reason or another.
| PurpleBullet chapter 16 . 10/8/2013
I really like this story. I can't wait until you post the next chapter.