Reviews for Betrayed
Magnusss chapter 17 . 1/15
urgh, i know you are there. Update the fucking story.
tammy henson chapter 17 . 1/12
Please please update soon
FlowersBite chapter 5 . 11/27/2017
He could have reminded Snape that he himself was a half blood
Autumn Souls chapter 5 . 10/7/2017
This is frustrating to read.
SortingHat chapter 4 . 8/6/2017
I think you whipped this up really fast on your smartphone.
SortingHat chapter 3 . 8/6/2017
They act more like *rich snobby liberals* that will tout the latest Mac Book Pro just cause they have money to burn.
SortingHat chapter 1 . 8/6/2017
Well in Ocarina of Time you can fight Ganondorf using one of your empty bottles to deflect his spells.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2017
Wow, this fanfic stomps on the cannon and then decides to defile the remains. What's the point to this? To show off how "original" and "unexpected" your writing could be? Changing things to be unrecognizable is not the same as being good at writing. Good writers can surprise readers without having to rewrite a good chunk of the source material. On its own, nothing makes sense, from how people react to a kid to the snake ritual to why McGonal hates him.
Lord Kuchiki chapter 17 . 2/2/2017
Loved it
rhizz17 chapter 17 . 2/2/2017
Update please
Reading addict chapter 17 . 1/23/2017
Please please please PLEASE update. I love this story
TheRainyAbe chapter 10 . 1/4/2017
I love the story, but I think there js a mistake. Salazar can't have had a seventh year in Hogwarts, he was a founder fr heavens sake
Fallow53 chapter 17 . 12/26/2016
xxx Kudos xxx : )
Destineyofme chapter 17 . 9/6/2016
This is great please write more in the future
Zeref Blackfyre chapter 17 . 9/2/2016
Heh he got played~XD
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