|Reviews for heartbeat|
| Lady Mischief chapter 3 . 1/10
I never thought of the aftermath of Galaxia for the Shitennou to have another chance. I really like that concept and hope you decide to add more chapters to this story. I find it full of promise and original from other stories that I have read.
| kaleidoscopedisaster chapter 3 . 10/6/2014
Your voice as a narrator has a poetic feel to it but not the pretentious kind. Your writing is very earthy and raw. It's refreshing to see all these characters so human rather than husks with characteristics tied to them. You brought such life to this s/s trope of the shitennou returning.
You have a strength within character interactions. From Rei constantly adjusting as Minako continues to push on her as she rests to the simple statement of Mamoru consoling Zoisite. These actions are almost understated but they bring such a force to your writing. You are a champion of "show don't tell".
I'm so devastated that this is the end of it. I read the first chapter a long time ago when it was still a oneshot. At first, I was pleasantly surprised for the two new chapters (even reread the first one) but now I'm upset that there isn't any more to read. I hope you do end up coming back to it.
| Khmyh chapter 2 . 7/8/2014
I really like your character portrayal! Especially Rei and Minako's friendship, and how Rei and Jadeite reconciled! Thank you for sharing!
| 8 Acres East chapter 3 . 6/4/2014
So wonderful. Please keep writing these! You have excellent word choice.
| 8 Acres East chapter 2 . 6/4/2014
So beautifully written. Very real and moving.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
Amazingly written! I love this peaceful resolution. A lot of fun stories have a lot of shallow Jedite with a hot-tempered Raye...I like that your is a different portrayal. So very well done.
| darkrose923 chapter 3 . 5/28/2014
This is amazing and you should keep going.
| zoteria chapter 3 . 4/24/2014
it was very interesant and good story you have here, indeed Minako is one of a hell to write and let me tell u that Kunzite isn't better... but that make theme a hole new world to try and write something like this, and that in the end will be very good. 'cause is more like the real life goes, things doesn't forget so esay, and forgive someone is is a really hard part to do, specially with all the past they all carry on...
But well i think that your story is excellent and i will like to read more and see what happen with the others *-*
| AriellaSerenity chapter 3 . 12/11/2013
I love this! Please update soon!
| Freefan1412 chapter 3 . 12/11/2013
For how difficult she was to write, Minako is really a master piece. Coldness, rationality, duty vs emotion, memories (and possible wants). A conflicted character who still keeps herself in balance. Her relationship with Kunzite seems to be (have been) infected by that as well and it gives it a very different taste from Rei's with Jadeite.
Nicely done. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)
| Princess Ren chapter 2 . 6/11/2013
Sweet! How I wish I can still read more ReixJadeite moments.. Please make some more? Keep up the good work!
| xSmallLadySerenity13 chapter 2 . 6/10/2013
This Was Really Good! The Details & Writing Was Superb, Really Looking Forward To Reading More!
| Richforce chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
I don't think this couple would get back together, not because of what Jadeite did but because her Father had basically ruined Men for her forever.
| TheSilentDarkAngel chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
This is just lovely!
I'm soo happy that you updated this fic!
Feel so nice to read something new in this fandom.
Keep going and stay inspired!
| agustine chapter 2 . 6/8/2013
i will wait not just for mina and kunzite,because i love how senshi and shitennou together,yes you right when you feel the heartbeat you know that someone has to feeling because that's the sign they are a 'human'