Reviews for Pokemon Adventures: AshGray Chapter
DullDemon47 chapter 29 . 1/22
i hope you get your muse back, i know how it is to lose inspiration for a story.
also, i really love this story. :3
Rankin de Merthyr chapter 1 . 1/18
-Luckyshipping

Absolutely Heretical. I'm glad you guys aren't canon.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/20/2016
One of the worst chapters of all time.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2016
Guest is right you guys suck...
Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2016
You're all stupid for using the review section of a story to argue over opinions.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2016
Fanboy below me

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Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2016
Fanboy above fionna.
Guest chapter 28 . 8/21/2016
How dare you leave us off us off with a cliffhanger! WHYYYYYY
VVV chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
IT WAS ONE CHAPTER
fionnaflavoredcake chapter 15 . 8/20/2016
I agree with akinos, the way Red was treated like the bad guy came off as overdramatic. I liked his lines to Ash but the rest, not so much.
fionnaflavoredcake chapter 7 . 8/20/2016
If a plot point like that takes forever to be established it needs revising. Period.
Guest chapter 29 . 8/12/2016
This is so good hope you can continue the story soon
Guest chapter 5 . 8/5/2016
Yes tofes turned do tl to the major plot point that was being established. It doesn't make it any less serious by placing a story element within the battle.
fionnaflavoredcake chapter 6 . 8/2/2016
Red did get the upper hand at points but even then he was overwhelmed by Ash's levelless Pokemon most of the time, we got the point about halfway through. It doesn't help that this is supposed to be a serious adventure story. There's more to Pokemon than battles.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/30/2016
I don’t know I mean Red got the upperhand mutiple times. I'd call it pretty even and maybe it was long but the focus of pokemon is the battles. Yes I know you're not the only one with an opinion.
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