|Reviews for Pokemon Adventures: AshGray Chapter|
| Mr.Ingenious chapter 29 . 3/9
This story...is amazing. I mean really, just the way you have written the characters, the scenarios, and the interaction that they have is just amazing! I'm just so breathless at what I read I cannot stress enough that his is probably one of the best Pokemon fics I have ever read!
I understand that you would have lost motivation. I mean, I have tried to write fics before where I just ended up loosing motivation. But eventually I find motivation. But I understand and support you through and through.
I am following and favoriting and I cannot wait for the next chapter. Congratulations. :)
| FireDragonX23 chapter 29 . 3/3
Glad to see you back
| OnlyNeeded151 chapter 29 . 3/3
Yay! I knew you hadn't abandoned us! _
| Norad2 chapter 29 . 3/3
I'm going to use this review spot to offer a bit of encouragement: There are definitely still plenty of people who are looking forward to this story's next chapter, I know I'm not the only one. When I noticed that this was an author's note and not a proper chapter I had one of those "NOOOOO" moments. That said, take your time to write a story that you're proud of.
| Skydancing Dragon chapter 29 . 3/2
It's quite all right to take breaks, especially if the reason is completely valid. I myself can't update unless I have muse, which is very rare. Although when I do have muse, I end up writing thousands of words...
| MARheaven-ninja chapter 29 . 3/2
That's all right, loosing inspiration due to some issues in real life or simply getting hooked onto something else happens.
| Wildpikachu9 chapter 29 . 3/2
| dragoncreators chapter 4 . 2/27
Red is going to DESTROY Ash.
| jack clark chapter 1 . 2/24
Amazing fanfiction, i love it
| FunFX2012 chapter 28 . 2/16
Writers block is annoying isn't it, not being able to write anything is the worst. Anyway good story update soon ok :)
| Norad2 chapter 12 . 1/30
Wow... that was an awesome chapter... (Norad2 Is Speechless)
| Norad2 chapter 4 . 1/30
Once again, nicely done, you kept a balance in the characters, and you're right, I think, that there would probably be a bit of a freak out before they started getting along. Something I noticed, is that Ash said he had never met Giovanni. Now my memory is a bit sketchy reaching so far back, but I know for a fact that Ash and friends faced off against him in "Mewtwo Returns," I think it was called. At any rate, I won't spam all your chapters. Can't wait to see what happens next!
| Norad2 chapter 3 . 1/30
Hello there, He-Who-Could-Not-Think-Of-A-Good-Name! I realize that by now this is a rather old chapter, but your author's notes encouraged I share my thoughts. So far, so good. I'm from the anime side of the Pokeworld, but with decent experience in the manga. As such, I can't really give a good opinion on whether the Dex Holders are in character, but I will say that the dialogue up to this point has been very solid. Now, I can comment on the anime characters, and let me tell you, it looked really good. The reason being is that you seem to have a very good idea of how dialogue in the anime flows: a lot of back and forth, with a fairly quick pace. For me, if you want to write in the anime, it has to flow like the anime, and your writing certainly does. One last thing, if I may, your profile mentioned we were free to make recommendations on other story we have read, so I'm going to suggest "The Ash Connection." With compete sincerity, I consider it the ultimate expression of the Pokemon anime in fanfiction. Good day!
| Name Under Construction chapter 16 . 1/14
The May-Red interaction was cute and awesome and I need more of them being friends together.
| Name Under Construction chapter 13 . 1/14
Thank you, thank you, thank you for not underestimating May and giving her the credit she's due! Everyone seems to forget what she's capable of when Ash isn't around, or worse, assume she's completely useless without when the opposite is true.