|Reviews for No Longer In Pain|
| Ryan chapter 6 . 9/6/2012
I would like to read more, I'd like to see what happens next
| yjcalvini chapter 6 . 9/6/2012
I have to admit that i couldnt really follow what was happening. I feel like u have a good idea, it just has to be structured a little better, if u continue to write i will continue to read :-)
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
Please, try to get a bit structure in this text.
it's hart to read without Absätze und Interpunktion...
| yjcalvini chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
I have to say that this fic made me wonder why Jadzia was in pain and what exactly was going on...its almost as if a whole story has happened beforehand and what you wrote was the climax...interesting. I think you should expand and elaborate on your fic, it'd be cool to read.