|Reviews for Their Final Good Bye|
| Era Dubois chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
Boo so sad :(
| ILUVANIMES123 chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
awwww good and sad at the same time but sho deserved it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
I feel bad but i kind if enjoyed him having his heart ripped out. I love Sho and all but he deserves it. He did something to her no man should ever do he pureed her heart i know it happens but he got what was coming. I absolutely loved this though really good.
| elaine12 chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Hello! I actually don't understand the meaning of part each other away if they finally know what their feelings are, an saying each other to find true love when they already have it.
| maria chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
I'm deeply touched!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
tat was way too dramatic and sad for skip beat :(. *tears*
but it was good. i feel really bad now
| aurora0914 chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
you should make a sequel, plz
| winter-ghost-20 chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
ahhhhhh wuuuuuu huhuhuu.. im crying lol... good job for this dude...
| Jhiz chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
That was hot but ended so sadly... I was hoping for a happy ending for Sho for once but alas, he does not get one...
Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing this tantalizing moment between the two childhood friends as they mature from children to adults.
| BunnyBoo800 chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Nice way of putting a closure between those two.
| CrimsonQueen24 chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
This is so sweet and sad! I loved how you portrayed another side their relationship. Since we mostly just see the argumentative side in the manga... Great job writing this! I felt all the pain and sadness they felt. I really liked your closing line too, it was bittersweet. A truly lovely story about letting go.
| Blazin' Chen chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Aww, that was so amazing... I needed a nice Shou/Kyoko fic after reading that dark story about Ren and Kyoko's marriage life. You know, the one where Ren snaps and he says he would do anything for her because he loves her, and so ends up killing the girl... I dunno I don't really wanna go back to that dark story to see what her name was... Hiruma? Idk, but he ends up killing the woman he cheated on Kyoko with. So, yeah, I needed a little nice story of Shou and Kyoko after all that, and now I'm positively happy.- Keep doing more Shou/Kyoko fics, please? You don't really see much fanfics with Shou and Kyoko having a happy ending with little Shoyoko kids... Actually I don't even think there's a fic like that at at all, seeing as how I'm like one of those, what, TEN Shou/Kyoko fans? Maybe I should write a fic about them, but I'm not really confident in my writing skills...
Wow this is an annoyingly long review, isn't it? Sorry, I'll go now. Matta ne!
| Awesome chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
To the reviewer below "gross" ...how old are you? If you do not maturely understand the why kyoko had to close this chapter of her life this way then you surely are not mature enought to be able to read it. What is so terrible with sleeping with the man you have loved all your life to finally let him go? It makes a lot of sense, sometimes you love somebody so much and they love you back but the person might not be the right one for you, and this happens every day, people don't break up only because the love is gone, they break up because they are not right for each other, it's part of growing up and finding that person that is truly right for you. I think the author does a superb job reflecting this bittersweet ocurrence in life. The one shot is very real, and very emotional, and shows maturity and acceptance, and that's life! The truth is , that you may fall in love several times in your life, and that does not make you a "whore". Seriously, what's up with the double standard, it's horrible that women (i'm gonna guess "gross" is a woman) are so judgemental about each other or in this case female characters.
| gross chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
FLAME FLAME FLAME. YES. KYOKO'S CLASSY PARTING GIFT OF CHOICE IS SEX. OK. CUZ THAT MAKES SENSE. THANKS FOR FLOOZY-IFYING KYOKO.
sowwie. i think im taking my anger out on you cuz THEY SHOULD STAY TOGETHERRRRRRRRR. OR SHE SHOULDN'T BE SO WHORISH. BITCH HAD HER CAKE AND ATE IT TOO. DAMNIT.
| rilakkat chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
That ending was sad yet beautiful. D':