|Reviews for All Sorts of Wrong|
| BlackDevilVixen chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
| Encypher chapter 3 . 4/3/2013
Gareth and Richard are so cute. I like how they take it upon themselves to decide who is right for their sister. Poor James, having to fight with Eva just to get her to react to him. Was really good to read about James realising that he fancies Eva
| TsunamiTides chapter 3 . 1/1/2013
interesting to see how James works his feelings out :) I am anticipating the next update to game on!
| TsunamiTides chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Haha I was cracking up the whole time!
| jessre chapter 3 . 12/24/2012
I laughed my way through this fic. The scene with Richard and Gareth is especially good, could have been taken from life, especially the internal processing of information and the awkwardness ("for lack of anything better to say" etc). James is such a perfectly clueless male. It was fun stepping inside his head for a while. :)
Although he really would go for a stress-relieving *flight*.
| unspeakable49 chapter 3 . 12/24/2012
This was brilliant! I'm going on to Game On right away! :D
| Queen SkyRose chapter 3 . 12/23/2012
I loved this little story! Your characterization of James is fantastic! His voice is so strong. It was such a cute and funny story-thanks for writing it. Merry Christmas to you as well! :)
| Alexis chapter 3 . 12/19/2012
haha, I love All Sorts of Wrong and Game On! it's hilarious how oblivious they both are. just saying, but you should totally write a story about Rose and Scorpius. I think that would be an awesome story too. :)
| thedoctorspadawan chapter 3 . 12/21/2012
Merry Christmas, do we get a special Christmas chapter, of this of Game On?
| Nomurai chapter 3 . 12/20/2012
Hahaha, the guys are so amusing to read about. I wonder what kind of letters his curious mum has been writing to him though...
Thanks for the update!
| brilliant incandescence chapter 3 . 12/20/2012
I love this! The way James realizes that he fancies Eva, just perfect.
| NotNearlyAMuggle chapter 3 . 12/20/2012
Love it. That's all there is for me to say:)
| rednose chapter 3 . 12/20/2012
So wonderful and I smiled all the time. Poor James - it was really a hard way to learn his feelings for Eva, but very entertaining.
The first scene is wonderful - the way James watchs her and then denied it - so tpical and funny. Christopher and Fred really have a good time with that and not to forget in the future. I wonder if Fred would not make a wonderful wedding speech out of that - when James and Eva will end as a couple in the future.
Your way to write this is so perfect. I can't describe it better. I got the impression I sit in this class and watch James.
Gareth and Richard are so sweet and very brave - I would have not gone and give a gu the permission to going out with my older sister, when this guy haven't confirmed it verbal. James' reaction is so funny and I like the way they discuss Eva's good and bad sides. My favourite line - that is easy "James felt his mouth quirk up in a smirk as he momentarily toyed with the idea of asking Richard how he felt about Lily just to give the younger boy a taste of his own medicine. " Very interesting that James knew it so earlier and that Richard has these feelings for so long. Interesting. I will keep that in mind.
It was so clear that Quidditch must be involved in that moment when James realises his feelings. So tpical for these two. But wonderful written - the whole dialogue was so interesting and fun to read. I reall enjoed it.
Brave of James to admitted it to his friends. He must have known that they would take the micky out of him. Poor Christopher - he makes the same mistake as Christine -James and Eva are people who must livewith their feelings for a while, before admitting it to the other person. But so typical of James to start row just to be near her and see her in action.
Really a wonderful chapter and I have enjoyed it. Thank you for a wonderful early chrismas present. I'm so happy that ou have written the two extra chapters. I would have missed them. Now it is perfect and complete.
I must finish - I catched a bad cold and must go to bed. Sorry. Perhaps more in a few days.
| dancingonstars chapter 3 . 12/20/2012
I loved it. I love when the heroes are so clueless about who they love.
| jennyellen chapter 3 . 12/20/2012
That was brilliantly funny and just amazing. I really enjoyed it! :)