|Reviews for Torn Apart|
| Samie Seville chapter 15 . 1/26
I really liked your story
| MunkLover4Ever chapter 16 . 12/16/2013
Loved this story soooooo much :) I'm sorry about all of the annoying reviews but I just wanted to say that I really loved this story :)
| Beniceoreles chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Hey all. You people give bad reviews on this great story shut the fuck up keep your opinions to your dang in selfs and if you got a problem with that than don't even review any shit cause I don't stand for bullying or any kind of bullying so keep that shit to your self
And by the way dude great job on the story it's like the 2 nd best story I have read in my life thank writing something like it lets us what kind of people are really out there bye
| Vic The Super Saiyan chapter 15 . 12/26/2012
I am truly sorry for what I said in my other review I wasn't myself yesterday.
I have actually whacked myself with a frying pan for my own stupidity.
| Vic The Super Saiyan chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
Okay I am an Angry reviewer you are talented I'll give you that but you gave up on this for a bunch of MORONS who wouldn't know talent if it walked up and bit them in the ass. I gave up because I have no inspiration I'm just not cut out for this stuff. you whoever you are. If I knew who you are and where you live if it were close by you could expect a visit that ends more violently than you could possibly imagine, I have already come up with three ways to pound you and I'll share one with you. I come to your house kick the front door down roundhouse kick you to the floor stomp on your elbows and knees until I hear the loud crack of them shattering, than I use your torso like a trampoline until you ribs are shattered.
And when I've been satisfied I will spit on your bloody and destroyed body. Walk back out the front door, laughing maniacally. then head home after a job well done. so with that I take my leave from your pathetic excuse of an ending.
| Chipmunk Superfan chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
there is a way. alvin gets the other abuser (i would too) and saves simon, and the three brothers go to live with Ms. Miller.
| jaceylovessimonette4ever chapter 15 . 12/18/2012
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/13/2012
YES THERE CAN! You could have the lady 2 go for revenge and Alvin goes and fight back and then the others help out. Then! they end up wining SOMEHOW and and Alvin and Brittany,and Simon,and Jeanette,and Theodore,and Eleanor live HAPPY EVER AFTER! Well geting married
| TheodoreSeville85 chapter 16 . 12/7/2012
I've already told you how I feel about the way you ended the story (or didn't lol). I'd like to add something to that.
At least you told us you were done, and that the story was over. I can't tell you how many author's have abandoned stories and leave their readers hanging on, hoping it will someday be completed. At least this clears you up to write other things, without constantly have to worry about completing this.
I can't wait to see what story you come up with next.
| Northgalus2002 chapter 16 . 12/7/2012
I just want to know that I feel for you, if you feel that you have done all you could with this story and just close it the way you did, that is your choice and you shouldn't let those who have responded negatively get you down. If people want a happy ending to this story, they can imagine one themselves.
That said, this shouldn't discourage you from creating new stories (both for AATC or some other fandom). I for one would love to read some new stuff from you. No rush though.
| Xavious216 chapter 16 . 12/7/2012
Great point and I personally love the end it reminds me of the stories in my ap English lit. Classes I had to read, I think you made a fine ending, people should simply be grateful. I mean, I read a story with a pointless end and went nowhere, but this was just swell, just super
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/7/2012
I like the story... Maybe you could do a sequel...
| Bashy-T chapter 16 . 12/7/2012
fuck what people say! if it's causing you that much stress that you couldn't wait to end it then it's not worth the hassle. You shouldn't have to try an justify yourself. you could give the story up for adoption and see if other people can finish it to the level you started it. I doubt they could!
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/7/2012
Really, no ending?! Okay, I really liked the plot of this story, but not the ending or lack there of, sorry if I sound harsh but that was the biggest letdown I've ever seen. Even angst. or tragedy stories while having unhappy endings at least have an ending so there is some satisfaction from reading them even if it's not the ending you want, a bad ending is better than no ending. Sorry, but this is an incomplete story. Ashame too because I really liked the concept of the brothers split up and trying to reunite and Brittany's child(though I don't like the concept of a half human half chipmunk mutant thingy) which I really hoped to explore more and the abusive/murderous parents. And who the heck is that kidnapper!
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/6/2012
A human chipmunk hybrid? Okay, I'm not even gonna begin to go into what's wrong with that oh and poor Simon, why'd he have to end up with abusive step parents.