Ah wish there was more. Oh well, it was a nice enough story for what there is. Solid 7/10

Personally I think Kakashi would get his ass in gear and train Sasuke and Sakura more seriously after that OC teammate died. According to Sasuke's reflections it seems like he's still being a bum though which is dumb of him

Dropping info that chakra iron comes from human blood or chakra animal blood makes that whole "historical heritage" thing extremely creepy. Sounds like something an orochimaru of that time would do

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, please update

Thank you for the story. I wish you could have continued it, but life isn't always accommodating to our wishes. Thanks again and good luck in whatever you are doing now.

I love bow the chapter ends. Playing to Sasuke's pride and arrogance makes a lot of sense. If played right it could lead to him going to Orochimaru early too. Nice writing.

I desperately NEED more.
If you opened up a patreon I would be happy to pay.

Shame it's no longer being updated. I rather loved this story and would have liked to see Naruto and his team utterly smashing this Chuunin exam. Also wondering how Gaara being dead affects the story from then on. Same with Orochimaru.

Come on, man. You can't end a fanfic before the chunin exams, that's fucking mean. I was really enjoying this story as well, it was very well written.
On the off chance that you stumble into my review, I really hope that you continue it even after the 10 years away.

Awesome story! Very Creative! Please continue it someday!

The whole sasuke getting training seems unbelievable without the permission of the hokage. It basically the misuse of resources and lack of control on the hokage part. No one in there right mind will train him if they know he is a flight risk to himself and towards the village. Plus he just ruins the story and I am more focus on naruto. If it come the battle of the valley of the end hopefully naruto kills him.

I have enjoyed the story ends I find a very different from other stories that I have read and was wondering if you were planning on making a sequel or continuing

Great story! Hopefully you update soon.

I would like to know more about the ancient civilization. It doesn’t really make much sense how a civilization with similar technology to us would get destroyed and it is essentially impossible for all knowledge of it to be lost. It’s bothering me that it makes so little sense and yet I know nothing about it yet. I guess I just have to keep reading. Great story anyway

I haven’t read the story yet but don’t lose faith everyone! The author is still here, they favourited stories made in 2021 so they still exist and may one day come back!