Reviews for All Fall Down
ozlady80 chapter 15 . 2/22/2014
Awesome story I'm playing catch up with ur awesome stories!
Anne Celeste chapter 11 . 1/2/2014
Oky,ths girl iz rily sumthin ;-) B-) XD with al the tension n drama in the family n the pack abt marriage 4 ha n paul n the temporary separation of ha parents,,wen she gets pregnant tht wil b the icing on the frikin problem cake bt it wil b nyc if it actualy hapens
Saint-Brooke-Lynn chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Starting college at 16? Her and her friend would both still be in high school...
the newest daughter chapter 15 . 11/28/2012
Ok cant wate to start sequel
the newest daughter chapter 2 . 11/28/2012
Poor Paul Sam orders him not to tell her then Em is going to guilt him too tell her.
quietshadowwolf chapter 15 . 7/13/2012
i loved this story and cant wait till the sequel is out. i know it will be awesome. your make your stories get the reader to be on the edge their seat especially near the end. ill try reading all or most of your stories cause so far i think they are great ill read the two you mentioned in your note for this one. and ill let you know what i think of them so far as well. thank you for making great stories lol
ForverDoesn'tExist chapter 15 . 7/10/2012
I love your writting! :) It totally inspires me, I've read like almost everyone of your stories and they are fantastic! Your my favorite author on here! :)
3 Torn and Bleeding
ozlady80 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Awesome start
asking alexandria21 chapter 15 . 7/8/2012
wow i want more is all i have to say please put the sequel up soon wow such great writting and really enjoyed it
obsessedANDaddicted1 chapter 15 . 7/5/2012
I really loved the story the first 10 chapters, but (I'm sorry) I hated the end. It was awful and makes me sorry I started reading it all. I hope you publish a couple of other chapters, revealing how Sedona was pregnant and how she waited for him for a year. Then he'd like, come back, meet their kid and they get married and live happily ever after. Just a thought.
Angel N Darkness chapter 15 . 6/26/2012
awwww... i feel for sedona... you did a great job on this chapter... love it... cant wait for the sequel!
dark-lelu chapter 15 . 6/24/2012
loved this
BlueEyedCountryGirl chapter 15 . 6/23/2012
Loved this story so much and look forward to your other stories.
gabycaldemeraz chapter 15 . 6/23/2012


Abd he promised to keep his celphine and he lied! He LIED how can he do that to her!

Poor sedona!

Max! You kill me! Lol

Such good emprional work!
gabycaldemeraz chapter 14 . 6/23/2012
I feel terrible for paul, just when he had her in his arms and they were completely happy, she is taken away from him :(

what do you mean "the worst decision in his life.." stupid Pup, what are you gonna do!

OH WOW! SAM! oh my gosh! :S

After all that has happened, Emily being here for him and telling him she loves him.. she is so perfect :)

WHAT THE HELL PAUL! noooooo.. you are gonna kill her! SHE NEEDS YOU!

OH WOW.. smart thinking Carlisle

Paul's speech is making me cry! :(

YES! oh my God paul! you have to take it back! she needs to recperate and you have to be there, she'll be weak without you!
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