Reviews for The Pretty One
karjens44 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Absolutely beautiful from first word to last
FaBbEr0oZ chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Myka is gorgeous! She just doesn't understand. She's wise for chasing after HG. She'd have deserved a butt kicking otherwise
rustyliver chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
'that infernal communication device that never stopped screaming about cookies'

best line ever.
NerdsbianW13 chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
This is a really cute story and I love the ending! 3
ms17thst chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
This is a great beginning - looking forward to see where it goes. Deals with a great subject of ego strength.
tm200 chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
This was really good. Love how fast Myka followed once Helena was out the door. Thanks for sharing!
Xenite chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
I think this story is so relevant and evergreen because we see admittedly-more-beautiful woman so frankly praise and emphasize "just" a moderately pretty one, regardless of whether they're romantically connected or not. It just points the (unfortunate) timeless fact that womens' self esteem is still explicably tied to their outward appearances, and that even smart women very often have self-image issues. I'm gald to see that Myka saw the light at the end of the story!
Ariel Hedgehog chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
I barely have time to review your other story that you publish something new! YaY! Very well written as usual, I just wanted to hug Myka. "Myka had learnt early in life that to get attention she had to be smart. Smarter than everyone else. And she never managed to overcome the truth that what she had always struggled to get, Tracy had commanded. Tracy was the pretty one. Myka was the nerd." I love that part. Excellent work! :D