Reviews for A Better One
tsukuyomi.sakurachi chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Ciel is very different from other people. he lives because of revenge but he wasn't blinded by it like most people who wants revenge. He is different and Undertaker really thought clearly about him and portrayed his different identity in this fanfic.
Pandaleski chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Eeeep! I love the last line :P "Ciel was one in a million. It was a shame that it wasn't a better one." haha :P So Undertakerish CHARACTER STUDY but yeah i like it :P Just wish it wa slinger -sniffle-
xMiss Shizaya Michaelisx chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Even though short, that didn't stop how extremely powerful and beautiful this one-shot is. You got the point across flawlessly. A great example of descriptive writing. Simple yet complex. Well done! -