|Reviews for It Won't Rain|
| Leez chapter 40 . 1/8
I do t mean to be an ass, and I know that you finished this story a while ago, however I feel that I have to say: this story has go to be one of the most depressing I've ever read, and that's all without going into assault and other criminal activities. I mean damn, the amount of shit that you have thrown at Bella and Alice, pretty much continually with no real rest for the in between is horrific. I don't usually care about things like that but come on, even in their relationship it seems like they're fighting each other more than anything, there's no trust or happiness either. Damn.
| Gillian Aubrey chapter 74 . 12/8/2013
I love this story! I'm sorry I didn't review before now but I read straight thru and couldn't stop, lol! This was such a thought provoking story and I know you did a lot of research and it showed. All the conflicts Bella had within herself and outside herself were tough to read at times but it was so good to see her happy at the end. I really loved Alice and Bella and how their relationship progressed. I also have never read a story of yours with a mean Edward so I'm probably ruined by the wonderful one you had in this one. I loved how supportive and kind he always was to Bella and helped her so much. Thanks so much for sharing this! I'm off to read the sequel! :)
| kevin w.shaffer chapter 46 . 11/5/2013
well crap this should be really screwed up for a while.
| Guest chapter 45 . 11/5/2013
go find her now.
| Guest chapter 44 . 11/5/2013
Well crap that wasn't the right thing to say.
| Guest chapter 43 . 11/5/2013
Listen to those words Alice.
| Guest chapter 42 . 11/5/2013
so is she ,and will Bella stay away from Erica guess we will see won't we?
| Guest chapter 41 . 11/5/2013
Girl just go home and ask her you should know that Erica doesn't like you and will do what she canto get between the both of you. now go and talk to her.
| Guest chapter 40 . 11/5/2013
| Guest chapter 39 . 11/5/2013
So will the couple have problems with Erica? probably.
| Guest chapter 33 . 11/5/2013
Bella needs to get pass her doubts.
| Guest chapter 26 . 11/5/2013
it's good that Bella has a friend like Edward they need each other right now.
| Guest chapter 25 . 11/5/2013
Another step,which Bella needs to just accept and she will feel much better about herself and their relationship.
| Guest chapter 24 . 11/5/2013
So is Bella going to keep his "thing" just for Alice?
| Guest chapter 20 . 11/5/2013
So it seems they are taking the next step in their relationship.
so when he gets the castration will he have feelings for Alice or will he just not get an erection?