Reviews for Move Along
Joebee chapter 1 . 7/5/2021
Oh my gosh, good story! Really enjoyed it!
Galinda V. Maxwell chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
Th at was a great story!
VioletFieldofFlowers chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
I loved this. So well written, and so true to the characters. You have such an amazing voice that's always worth the read!
ShoeGoil chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Great story, old friend. The characterizations were spot-on, as usual. And I love the risks you take in your writing. Satisfying read :)
Kirsten Erin chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
Wow. Very interesting and well-written. I like the way you wrote each of them, especially Racetrack. But Jack's taking the hit for David was also wonderful and completely in-character. Altogether, this was a very well done oneshot. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!
TheWildHeffernan chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
I thought it was really interesting. Awesome job!
illegiblescrawl chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Whoah! Woah, woah, WOAH! What just happened? Crutchy...and Jack...but Monahan...and Race...WHAT?

That all happened so fast, so exciting, that I couldn't stop reading, even though half of the time I had no clue WHAT I was reading! GREAT writing, can't wait for the update! I'm keeping an eye on THIS fic, that's for sure!
autumnamberleaves chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Oh wow! That was a good story-depressing but good! Great job!
newsiesluva chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
I like that you explored Mohan's piont of view. When I read Jack was sentenced to Sing Sing I cried and I never cry for book characters! Brava!