Reviews for Demons of Metropolis
light-chiix3 chapter 4 . 3/9/2013
Oooh...it seems I was wrong, actually the party was alright, but...
Woah, so much action, and thanks to Kelly Drew and May met! :)
Kelly...I'm sooo sorry for your death, I had already taken a like to you...ç_ç
light-chiix3 chapter 3 . 3/9/2013
Ooooh...The last part makes me think something will go wrong with the party...
Eheh, I'm soon going to find out if I'm right or not :DD
I loved this chapter too, thanks to make me dream with every word you write :)
light-chiix3 chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
Just as I expected, this was amazing *O*
I love your writing style sooo much, it makes everything seems magical...
And I love the story! ;DD
I'm going to read the next chapter soon *-*
light-chiix3 chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Woah, this prologue makes me sooo curious! 3 That's exactly what I was looking for, thank you! *O*
Now I gotta go, but as soon as I'll be back I'll continue reading your story :DDD I can't wait to do it! 8D
14MayRose chapter 21 . 10/14/2012
Why did you have to go and kill them? Why? *sobbing*
Really good story with a really tragic ending :(
quick question, how do you come up with the ideas?

14MayRose :D
TheDisguisedFairy chapter 21 . 6/4/2012
Oh, my gawd! Dude, you have no idea how much a I love this! I love this to death with all my heart! GAH! If I could favorite this a hundred times, I would! Oh, my heck! I love this to bits and pieces! Oh, and that last line was one of my absolute favorites!

"Then again, Drew had always kept his promises."

That part was just fantastic! I hope you write more Contestshipping fanfics. PEACE (hopefully for not too long)!

TheDisguisedFairy
TheDisguisedFairy chapter 20 . 6/4/2012
How come this made me sadder than Ash dying? *sniff* *sniff*
TheDisguisedFairy chapter 19 . 6/4/2012
Ash, died? *sniff*
TheDisguisedFairy chapter 18 . 6/4/2012
Angels, lying? Man, this story is just amazing!
TheDisguisedFairy chapter 17 . 6/4/2012
My word! This story is just so breathtaking and it takes away my problems!
TheDisguisedFairy chapter 15 . 6/3/2012
May died? NO! That can't happen since there's like 24 chapters and this is only the 15th!
rayningnight chapter 21 . 6/3/2012
Wow. This was actually pretty good for a AU story. I think you could have gotten more reviews if you had posted this weekly or daily instead of all in one shot. I noticed there was not 'updated' and only a 'published' date, so only a few people would have seen this story at the beginning of the Pokemon category - unless someone (like me) looked up some May/Drew stories and actually took the time to look further back.

Anyway, maybe you should try and delete this story, and then update it weekly or something again. You'll get more readers, reviews, and you'll be able to re-read you stuff to check on spelling mistakes or grammar stuff (I saw a few back here, so...)

-Twinklefeather

PS: Great story!
TheDisguisedFairy chapter 14 . 6/3/2012
That last part confused me a bit, but I'm sure it'll come to me later.
TheDisguisedFairy chapter 13 . 6/3/2012
Oh, I'm so proud of Ash at this moment! He wasn't being dense and helped Drew and May! I swear if I could favorite this story more than once then It'd already be done!
TheDisguisedFairy chapter 12 . 6/1/2012
Man, Norman must not know his daughter very well...
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