Reviews for Love Making
poke master chapter 1 . 11/10
1 ash loves pokemon not girls. 2 deal with it
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17
Do a one where he fuckes all his companians(that are girls) and he chooses one
ultimateCCC chapter 1 . 6/11
Review or PM?
Shadow Wolf chapter 1 . 3/9
good job for a beginner
ng jun cheng chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
How about a plot with ash and cynthia
jack chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
ash and latias hardcore smut
Super banana man chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
Okay I guess
Amber chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
Ok...tht was good and yet it up... -_- im not really good at this sort of thing...srry...
jack chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
how do you know cun tastes salty
Jack chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
It was good

:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
Appleguy25 chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
You need to work on your spelling and grammar a bit, and weave the lemon into an intising story to make it more emotional and more natural. But other than that it was a great lemon.
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
Great one shot here! Nice lemon!
jeannot1978 chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
Not bad for a first time lover's bedroom olympics. As a general rule, girls will have more stamina than the guys. I'm working on a few lemons myself, with an adult triangle featuring Ash Ketchum, Officer Jenny and Nurse Joy; another with Ash & Misty; one with Ash & Dawn; and one with Ash & Serena. So, good luck with any future fanfics you may have on the back burner.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
I have a suggestion to make. You can copy from ash x cynthia, the part where ash got cynthia pregnant and proposed to her, and was about to be raped by misty, may, and dawn
Choclate lover69 chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
It was good
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