Reviews for A Fight for the Kingdom
Guest chapter 2 . 6/2
ugh. I can't do it, maybe you can fix the grammar. I get really bothered when i see grammatically wrong sentences, phrases or whatever. The story has potential but it's badly written, everything seems to be rushed and honestly no one wants that.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2
The pacing seems to be rushed and the dialogues are kinda stiff? Hmm and there's some grammatical errors every now and then. I hope this won't ruin the story tho. It has an interesting plot.

-chapter 1
Guest chapter 6 . 6/10/2016
So Your telling me that his long lost butler just pops outta nowhere?!
Guest chapter 3 . 6/9/2016
god that's funny
skylar chapter 15 . 7/2/2015
Great job with the story. loved it
Archdale chapter 15 . 7/1/2015
Dawww my gaawwwwd! I read the whole thing in a day. It was amazing! I loved it I loved it I loved it!
Guest chapter 15 . 3/5/2015
wonderful story you should of added them kissing at the end that would of been really romantic.
CupcakeGirl633 chapter 15 . 9/29/2014
OMG this is such a cute story! I love all the characters and I love Kai's personality. I really hope Kai lives a good life. I'm glad that the lovers got reunited and like how Natsu is the dragon and Lucy is a princess. I love the nicknames they gave each other, and I seriously loved the plot! This is such a cool idea you have, and I loved reading each and every chapter! Great job with this story! :)
CupcakeGirl633 chapter 9 . 9/29/2014
CupcakeGirl633 chapter 7 . 9/29/2014
OMG this is awesome so far! Aster is Lucy! isn't it?! I'm so excited though, to find out, hehe. I love this plot and I love this idea. I hope Kai turns out well in the end, but at least he isn't a bad guy that will force Lucy to be with him or something. Great story!
CupcakeGirl633 chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
Hehe love this so far! Seems like an interesting plot! I wonder what's going to happen...
jackiejaimes chapter 14 . 3/6/2014
I didn't really enjoy the characters not from Fairy Tail but i like the story :)
Guest chapter 14 . 7/3/2013
Please write more!
4everFTfan chapter 13 . 6/16/2013
So, she remembers?
Adelyna13 chapter 12 . 6/1/2013
KAI? yayyyy
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