Reviews for Her Shield, His Sword
Rebi chapter 4 . 5/24
Kushina cursed also, and yet she's three. Really?
Zero-Tails317 chapter 8 . 5/3
Now THIS was an excellent, perfect story. Shame it had to end here but oh well...nice job:-)
Zero-Tails317 chapter 1 . 5/1
Wow I'm hooked:-)
jenny hotkins chapter 8 . 4/17
very awesome! you make me cry!
maxgoof296 chapter 8 . 4/1
AWSOME
Sailor Pandabear chapter 8 . 3/16
nice
Pandas01 chapter 1 . 3/10
This story was really great! Characters personalities we're on point and great plot but above all else... Nice lemon ;3
SulliMike23 chapter 8 . 2/18
You should do a series of oneshots featuring Naruto's adventures with Fairy Tail, Kushina's birth, Lucy meeting Kushina, and maybe even a chapter similar to the one with Asuka being babysat by Natsu.
SILVERE ESPADACHIN chapter 8 . 2/6
prequel for Her Shield, His Sword
The Writer Of Fate chapter 8 . 1/12
...Interobangs (!?) are used to indicate confusion.

How do you mix those up with exclamation points?

Apart from that, any other problems come from the general shortness of the story and a few grammatical errors.

It's decent, but it needs some fixing.
narutoyugitofuu chapter 8 . 11/22/2014
Great story. Another would be great.
LordHatredX chapter 8 . 10/12/2014
pretty good short story

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boredrandom chapter 6 . 8/1/2014
I love this story but why would he still have wounds after 5 months? because madaras chakra was poisonous that explanation sounds kinda cheap.
Luna Silveria chapter 8 . 7/30/2014
Awwww! 3 That was so kawaii! Love this story! _
myulander chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
nice job
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