Reviews for Her Shield, His Sword
SulliMike23 chapter 8 . 2/18
You should do a series of oneshots featuring Naruto's adventures with Fairy Tail, Kushina's birth, Lucy meeting Kushina, and maybe even a chapter similar to the one with Asuka being babysat by Natsu.
SILVERE ESPADACHIN chapter 8 . 2/6
prequel for Her Shield, His Sword
The Writer Of Fate chapter 8 . 1/12
...Interobangs (!?) are used to indicate confusion.

How do you mix those up with exclamation points?

Apart from that, any other problems come from the general shortness of the story and a few grammatical errors.

It's decent, but it needs some fixing.
narutoyugitofuu chapter 8 . 11/22/2014
Great story. Another would be great.
LordHatredX chapter 8 . 10/12/2014
pretty good short story

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boredrandom chapter 6 . 8/1/2014
I love this story but why would he still have wounds after 5 months? because madaras chakra was poisonous that explanation sounds kinda cheap.
Luna Silveria chapter 8 . 7/30/2014
Awwww! 3 That was so kawaii! Love this story! _
myulander chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
nice job
Guest chapter 8 . 7/11/2014
This was AWSOME! Worth sneaking on and reading while I'm grounded :D
Unnatural Reader chapter 8 . 5/12/2014
Damn that was a good story
Great chapter, gotta live the happy ending
Unnatural Reader chapter 7 . 5/12/2014
Aw, happy ending for almost everyone
Yay... Seriously great job
Unnatural Reader chapter 6 . 5/12/2014
Damn Laxus is so boned
Unnatural Reader chapter 5 . 5/12/2014
That was nice
Cool to see naruto kick ass and I will soon see how he rescues kushina
Unnatural Reader chapter 3 . 5/11/2014
Damn naruto got erza pregno that first time
Awesome fight scene this chapter, very well done
Unnatural Reader chapter 2 . 5/11/2014
Ooh, I wonder if madara has a trap set or if he will remain honorable
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