Reviews for The Hero Who Loved Me
WardenCommanderRevan chapter 7 . 1/13
Read your story- and it was amazing.

Amazing insight into Miranda's personality, thoughts, and character. And you made some of the game scenes more believable and real.

I know you get it a lot, but I'm pretty picky with my wholehearted 'I'd read this over and over and I like this writer's characters as much as the ones in my head'... Great work.
rjohanek chapter 7 . 4/26/2015
This story was great, and I really like your take on Miranda. I especially liked the way you showed her mental processes, her constant planning and lists. Very good, very believable, and very well written. Thanks for sharing.
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 4 . 2/7/2015
Do you have anything againts aqua, I hqpoen to be danish:::..,
jackson.taylor.31 chapter 7 . 10/28/2014
CHUCK the greatest tv show ever!
TakingAWalk chapter 7 . 8/15/2014
This was absolutely phenomenal. I don't think I've ever read a more accurate or comprehensive account of Miranda's character, and this could easily be turned into a canon novel. Very well done; this is perhaps my all-time favourite story on this entire site now.
TonyIronStark chapter 7 . 5/14/2014
i like alot jazz... XD and this songs were cool :D, and was a nice story
TrashKan chapter 7 . 3/26/2014
thumbs up for the Chuck references and very nicely written overall.
a very believable representation of Mirandas thought processes through me2.
Omen chapter 6 . 2/10/2014
Seriously, this migth be the best fanfic i have read so far! I mean, i'm not entirely happy with the way you portray Shepard (as i we all have our own way of playing him) but i really enjoyed reading this :)
Fantastic portrayal of Miranda, and Garrus is pretty much spot on :D
And i really love how you keep the dialogs rolling :)

Thanks for a great Fic :D
BlackRevenant chapter 7 . 1/28/2014
Thank you so very much for sharing this.

I enjoyed it immensely and you earned all 7 reviews.

BlackRevenant chapter 6 . 1/27/2014

New favorite chapter.

Would have loved to have read a lemon. Less porny and more erotica though, to actually see Miri reacting to Shep and him less sexing her up and more loving/worshipping her.

But I understand that such wouldn't have worked for this type story. Either way I enjoyed this.

For Science.

BlackRevenant chapter 5 . 1/27/2014
Ok my favorite chapter yet.

Romance is always always sweeter with a salty tang of a little angst.

Too much angst and it robs the fruit of its sweetness. Just like something too sweet can be disgusting.

As for we as a people. We are still very much primitive, despite the shiny veneer of technology and society. We haven't moved forward in hundreds of years. I personally don't think we ever will.

Not without some catastrophic event, something to rip away said veneer and force us to face and either crush or be crushed by the ugliness that is humanity.

BlackRevenant chapter 4 . 1/27/2014

Outside the serious nature as to why Shep shows such humor I really dig your version of Shepard in general.

He is out side of a few things, eerily close to my own.

BlackRevenant chapter 3 . 1/27/2014
I liked this chapter.

Felt kinda infodumpy but not.

Really liked the convo with Niket.

And baby Ori was epic adorable.

BlackRevenant chapter 2 . 1/27/2014

Hell yeah!

Hammerhead a bloody way!

BlackRevenant chapter 1 . 1/27/2014

I tend to not read ME fan fiction cause of conflict with what kind of Shepard I'd be reading.

Sometimes I want a story with a Shep close to mine, or one that I can generally tolerate. Pure Paragon or Renegade Sheps annoy me, I like Paragade or Renegon personally. Class varies too.

So far with this being outside of Sheps point of view it seems pretty awesome. Infiltrator eh?

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