|Reviews for The Hero Who Loved Me|
| BlackRevenant chapter 6 . 1/27/2014
New favorite chapter.
Would have loved to have read a lemon. Less porny and more erotica though, to actually see Miri reacting to Shep and him less sexing her up and more loving/worshipping her.
But I understand that such wouldn't have worked for this type story. Either way I enjoyed this.
| BlackRevenant chapter 5 . 1/27/2014
Ok my favorite chapter yet.
Romance is always always sweeter with a salty tang of a little angst.
Too much angst and it robs the fruit of its sweetness. Just like something too sweet can be disgusting.
As for we as a people. We are still very much primitive, despite the shiny veneer of technology and society. We haven't moved forward in hundreds of years. I personally don't think we ever will.
Not without some catastrophic event, something to rip away said veneer and force us to face and either crush or be crushed by the ugliness that is humanity.
| BlackRevenant chapter 4 . 1/27/2014
Outside the serious nature as to why Shep shows such humor I really dig your version of Shepard in general.
He is out side of a few things, eerily close to my own.
| BlackRevenant chapter 3 . 1/27/2014
I liked this chapter.
Felt kinda infodumpy but not.
Really liked the convo with Niket.
And baby Ori was epic adorable.
| BlackRevenant chapter 2 . 1/27/2014
Hammerhead a bloody way!
| BlackRevenant chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
I tend to not read ME fan fiction cause of conflict with what kind of Shepard I'd be reading.
Sometimes I want a story with a Shep close to mine, or one that I can generally tolerate. Pure Paragon or Renegade Sheps annoy me, I like Paragade or Renegon personally. Class varies too.
So far with this being outside of Sheps point of view it seems pretty awesome. Infiltrator eh?
| CN7 chapter 7 . 10/21/2013
Aww I love it. I could hear the song in my mind. It guy so well!
| CN7 chapter 6 . 10/21/2013
| CN7 chapter 4 . 10/21/2013
Hahahaha "probing Uranus"
| CN7 chapter 3 . 10/21/2013
This was such an interesting dip into Miranda and Oriana's past. I love how you demonstrated her escape, and her overwhelming confidence when she spoke to the Illusive Man-one of the most powerful humans in the galaxy no doubt. Every sentence of this chapter kept me on my toes. And their reunion was spectacular. Haha Oriana got all flustered.
| CN7 chapter 2 . 10/21/2013
I love the tone of voice you use as Miranda dictates the events. It's just so...her. And oh my gosh the part with the hammerhead! I'm dying!
| warfolomei chapter 4 . 8/10/2013
This was... interesting. Long space travel does affect the mind apparently.
| warfolomei chapter 3 . 8/10/2013
Very well done, especially the flashbacks fitting with what we know about her. That family reunion seemed to be beyond awkward. Only Jack is missing from the picture now.
| warfolomei chapter 2 . 8/10/2013
That last bit about hammering everyone... was very entertaining.
| warfolomei chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
This is actually quite good. Some new ideas and insight into already familiar setting. I even like her innervoice, which was always a major problem in other works. Let's see if you can keep this up.