Reviews for Dinner and Lingerie
ILoveAnnaKendrick77 chapter 1 . 5/1/2013 likey.
connyx chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Pieces of your work I really enjoyed.
I might get back to you one day to ask u sth
Thanks for sharing :)
Alexia2002 chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Great last line haha
longnite chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
A very sweet tale of discovery...and the joys of a talented detective carrying multiple handcuffs! Very nicely done...;)
Atychiphobia chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Nice ending. ;D
d3c3pt10n chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
You should describe us how was that first time, you know? Just an advice... :)
Anon chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Cute one-shot with a killer last line that was brilliantly played. I also liked how you got Janes speech pattern - not too wordy. Gag about Angela being Maura's object of affection was funny too.

One crit - too much use of their names to describe the action especially during the sex part. You switched it up a couple of times with detective but it still felt a bit - Jane kissed, Maura collapsed, Jane moaned, Maura climbed etc