|Reviews for Shot Twice|
| sandysan2013 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
I don't much like Gwen so I'm not sorry she got hurt and this is as likely a scenario as any, though I doubt Gwen could save Owen if Tosh could not. Nevertheless, I'm happy to have Owen saved.
I suppose it's bad form to present my preferences for out comes when this is your story to tell. I apologize if that offends you. However, I do have a bit of constructive criticism. I was able to follow the story because I've watched that episode loads of times. I wouldn't have been able to follow it if I hadn't seen th episode, however, because you left out some important transitions. For example, where does Gray go after shooting Gwen? I have no idea what sort of scanner Gwen is searching for and how it helps solve the problem at the nuclear facility.
Those things said, you've written a decent story and put it out there for all to see. That is something I've not been brave or talented enough to do. Congratulations!