I loved this. Everything about it. I would love to give a long detailed review, but I don't have words. The characters, the plot, the pacing, were all perfect. The network of relationships is so complex and so well-considered. Especially the proxy relationships, like Peeta being the nexus between Katniss and his family, and how their relationship to each other was defined by their relationship to Peeta. I loved the parallels between Peeta and Finnick and Katniss and Annie. The switch in emotional roles between Snow and Coin was so interesting. Snow, while still being evil and Snow, was humanized by his domestic role. Compared and contrasted against his simultaneous political role, there was just as much similarity as dissimilarity. Then Coin took on the role of the distant and looming political figure, driven by agenda and critically disconnected from her subjects.

You are an excellent writer. I love your stories so much. I read through them all and this is my second time going back to reread them. Your creativity and writing style are amazing. Thank you for sharing these!

This is a beautiful&impressive story
I love it ! thanks for writing !
I'm so happy reading this story !
And I want a sequel this
I want it !

:)

;) leeré esta historia...

Awesome story! loved it! x

This is even better on a second reading. Thanks for writing and sharing this! I love their love story and how it intertwined with the successful rebellion :)

Oh I like the premise so far. I had wondered how you were going to write Katniss as the president's daughter and I must say that I'm very very intrigued. Haha.

So i am a little confused. Were enobaria and Cashmere victors, or capital residents? In this story was snow older or younger than potrayed in the books? Wondering how panem faired in the end. Did coin take over as permanent leader?

I like the ending

Poor katniss

Profanity and I love haymitch bit what about cinna and effie

Je dead ally has stickhom sindrumd by now

Stock home sindrumd

If only he could