|Reviews for Deny Thy Father And Refuse Thy Name|
| coke fiend chapter 17 . 12/5/2002
| Shinigami chapter 17 . 12/4/2002
So what's going to happen to Lucius Malfoy now? Is he goign to Azahaban? Or will they give him the Dementor's Kiss? Cuz he deserves it for killing Sirius's mom... Now the truth came out, it explains why Padfoot hated Wormtail so much... And tried to break them up...So Sev was returned to life, but where is Moony?
| sparkysparky chapter 17 . 12/4/2002
Thank you for not leaving that chapter with us thinking Sev was dead! And my oh my, what tangled webs you've woven for the gang. I can't wait to read the rest of the fic. I do wish there were more Ron/Hermioneness in here...maybe in future chapters? This is a really great fic! I am glad that I stumbled upon it. :) Keep up the good work! And don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.
| SoulSister chapter 17 . 12/4/2002
jeez, it seems everyone's related to somebody else now. talk about a mixed up family tree. keep going .
| me chapter 17 . 12/4/2002
congratulations on a great chapter! loved the mini-history lesson. *snifflez* oh, if we only knew.. life would have been good from the start. love the story, don't stop writing.
| Eaiva le Fay chapter 17 . 12/4/2002
That was excellent! I can't wait until you update! So were Harry and Draco talking to Sev's spirit? And Sev killed Voldie, I take it?
| Zephdae chapter 16 . 11/27/2002
If u do not continue this very very very soon, I will personally hunt u down, & not just get 1 of my many trained hit men 2 do it.
Must…read…rest of fic…
| Eaiva le Fay chapter 16 . 11/26/2002
Ooh... Sheesh, I want to read more! lol I can't *believe* toy actaully have made me feel bad for Peter! It's a miracle, because I swear that I never thought that could happen.
I'm sorry I didn't r&r sooner. I've been both busy and avoiding the computer. *sheepish*
| Kelly chapter 16 . 11/25/2002
I truly believe that this is an incredible story. It has a wonderful mix of just about everything needed to draw even the most reluctant reader to it's pages. I love the budding father/son relationship between Harry and Sev. I also admire the way you attack the hidden personas of all the characters.
I must say, however, that I'm having a bit of trouble with the possibility of forgiveness for Peter. I agree that he was mistreated when growing up among the Marauders, and I realize that it's quite possible that he would feel guilt for betraying Lily and James. However, no matter how hard I try, I simply can't dismiss the blatant and cruel murder of the innocent muggles on the street that fateful day.
Please, please don't be offended by my thoughts, because I really do admire your work. Perhaps in future chapters you could address my concerns? It would be much appreciated, but no matter what you decide to do in the future, please keep writing. I will await the next update with great anticipation, though I'm sure that it will be as intriguing and creative as the rest of your work is.
Keep up the superb work!
| Toyo Malloy chapter 16 . 11/24/2002
Oh luv, that chappy was great. Love it ...
It's great when Sirius is the dark guy. It suits him really good. Siri Dracos uncle ... I think the poor guy is in shock now... xsmilex xlaughx
| me chapter 16 . 11/24/2002
veeery nicely done! of course, i'd have to say that three o'clock in the morning REALLY isn't the time to read it. I've actually never approved of any Snape pairings, but here, you really made it really great to read. *snifflez* and of course, i love that hxd coupling. there's nothing that i want to criticise you on, i think.. hmm, maybe a little grammar check here and there. I know I'm being a hypocrite, 'cause my grammar really stinks right now. I thought that the different languages that you've put into this story was really interesting. Although of course, i must ask if you know all of them? lol. it'd be really awesome if you did. That thing about Snape being Harry's dad was so... right. You somehow made it really acceptable. The beginning was somewhat confusing and cryptic, seeing as to how you liked to keep us in the dark, but as revelations were made, the plot thickens. *dun dun dun* I'm glad you put Lucius behind bars once and for all! He deserved it, that old (and as you would say) git! It's interestiing that you've changed the original plot a lot, and made it so that not everyone's an "angel," if you know what I mean. In here, they actually make mistakes! And I loved how much insight you put in each character (or did i use the wrong word?) Nevertheless, it's cute that 'Remy' was the "flower that was unattainable." I'd thought that the discription of "wild" for Sirius really did suit him, lol. And Harry and Co. turning into animagi was cool.
All in all, i think that this is a GREAT fic (although I'm sure that you've heard that a million times already) and that the ending is sure to be spectacular!
Keep up the good work.
| Starr Light1 chapter 16 . 11/23/2002
Oh my goodness! That is all I can say. I love how you create an answer for all the problems that your story would have had because of the books, instead of just ignoring them. I love a well thought out story. But PLEASE PLEASE don't let Harry change his name, it would be... well... sort of sacraligous or something. He just can't not be Harry Potter. Oh yeah, I really enjoy the idea of Sirius coming from a "Dark" family.
| Zephdae chapter 6 . 11/23/2002
| Zephdae chapter 5 . 11/23/2002
So…Severus and Lily were 'friends' huh…
I like the way you use his 1st name, makes our beloved Snape seem more…human.
| Zephdae chapter 4 . 11/23/2002
This is very weird… How can Snape be… That is just 2 strange… I think I know where this is going…
But I like it!