Reviews for A Spot in her Heart
Guest chapter 9 . 7/5/2014
Nooooooo spotttttt
Guest chapter 5 . 7/5/2014
Nicely Nicely's little sister chapter 9 . 6/22/2013
When I was considering names for my character in my Newsies fanfic, I considered "Tops", because she always had her hat on. Another one is "Hatless", just because I'm a sucker for irony. Quite often, newsie nicknames are based off their personality. So you could try "Runner" cause she ran from home, or maybe even "Wits" because she makes witty or smart remarks for everything.
Ace chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
_ I like it. Keep on writing, Quirk.
Wapomeo Huntress chapter 9 . 12/5/2012
This is... Slightly confusing, I like it, but it's confusing
Red Nevada Rose chapter 9 . 11/25/2012
Awwww poor Bley :( I can't tell if Jem is a good or bad guy, but I like him for now. ;) food chapter update soon please!
Ealasaid Una chapter 9 . 11/25/2012
i'm confused. Did spot hurt her?
Asian-Inkwell chapter 9 . 11/24/2012
oooh nice update! please update soooon! and maybe I'll update soon? XD pick a story any story lol
Marinaballerina chapter 9 . 11/24/2012
This story is very good. (sounds lame-so,ok, IT'S AMAZING!(yeah, that sounds better))
Abrasio chapter 9 . 9/22/2012
I'm gunna feel bad but your character is a Mary sue through in and out... Maybe if you somehow give her faults and make her sound not like a slut...I think the story would be better
No hate
The Booknerds chapter 9 . 9/16/2012
I love your story and I hope you update soon!
I have a question though... is Jem Bley's brother John?
Ron W.312 chapter 9 . 9/16/2012
Dear me...this is a whirlwind of emotions and confusion...
EXPRESSIONship chapter 7 . 8/6/2012
Good chapter! Not much critique on that...

(salt and pepper, XD, i'm flattered!)
EXPRESSIONship chapter 6 . 8/6/2012
Right to the point on this review:
1. Race does lose a lot of bets
2. the first section on race's pov was confusing
3. get into race's inner thoughts. you did ok on the other protagonists, but race needs more character development
Ron W.312 chapter 8 . 8/4/2012
I can't wait to see what happens! Update soon!
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