Reviews for The Other Side
wolf chapter 8 . 1/17/2014
that ending is somewhat cheesy. too quick and it doesn't match the rest of your writing style. it's like you finished this in a hurry.
...T did didn't you. that's no way to write things, even in a one shot. it's dumb and makes the rest of the story crash a bit, even with a happy ending.
Miko Hayashi chapter 6 . 6/8/2012
Lets see how much more interesting this is gonna get. Keep working at it. Poor Emi though. What if it is Itachi's and internally, he feels bad for hurting Emi? Idk. Just an idea.
Branded Bull chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
I thought this was nicely done. You did a good job connecting the reader with the character, and your study of the Akatsuki members was superb and concise. It would be interesting to see the rest of the Akatsuki and their actions, but Itachi is what I would like to see most. His actions were not what I thought they would be, so it would be nice to see whether or not his actions had another purpose.