Reviews for Memorial Day
mainegirlwrites chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Let's hope their lives were not a waste.

A great drabble.

Best, Randee
Swellison chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Wow, this is very powerful. Thank you for using my birthday drabble to convey such a meaningful message.
Woman of Letters chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
As soon as I saw Memorial Day as the title, I knew you'd picked John. A very moving story, with a message that we all need to hear. I liked John's line - "I was little more than a vengeful spirit."

Great job!
moviemom44 chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
I love the emotional progression here...from despair over the past to hope and a purpose for the future. Excellent. - Wendie
Dizzo chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
I read this while wearing my 'Help for Heroes' Wristband; I couldn't agree more.

Gorgeously poignant, great job x
Jimelda chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
First off, I love the title and the whole idea behind your drabble. Wow. Second, such great insight into John's psyche here. Him seeing himself as a little more than a vengeful spirit is something I've never really thought about before, but it certainly rings true.

Great response to the challenge.


Chick Feed chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
So very true.

Chick xx
SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Good take.
Enkidu07 chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Ugh. Killed me a little bit. Nicely done)
Amberdreams chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
John seeing himself as a living vengeful spirit rings true. And certainly the two surviving soldiers need a lot of support heartbreaking and insightful!