Reviews for Indecent Proposal
ChrisDGoosey chapter 33 . 2/7
Still one of the best epilogues in the fandom!
DarkBitterSea chapter 32 . 2/4
Trouble makers :)
DarkBitterSea chapter 31 . 1/28
Not Bree! Lol
DarkBitterSea chapter 30 . 1/7
Yay for babies!
debnin chapter 33 . 1/7
As always I have to say that I fan of your Edward and Bella keep the good work please.
DarkBitterSea chapter 29 . 11/12/2023
I want to be in Italy now. :)
Guest chapter 24 . 9/12/2023
God I am really starting to hate this Edward okay he loves Bella and all that. But Edward goes off on mike. Even though mikes anger was justified. But he doesn’t say anything to bree only some bullshit lines when bree purposely bargained on Edward and Bella’s conversation which led to Bella’s accident and all the other shit she pulled like cheating on Edward. Wow just wow I really don’t like this Edward. And this Bella is AMAZING edward doesn’t deserve her
Guest chapter 23 . 6/9/2023
I love this story so much, but the one thing that drives me batty is when someone is screaming “let me explain!” like fifteen times while running after another who’s leaving. Why not just start the actual explaining? Even a simple denial of what Mike said (“we *weren’t* hooking up in my car!”) would’ve been more useful. I get that maybe the writer isn’t yet ready for the misunderstanding to be cleared up, but there’s gotta be a better way to draw out the angst.
DarkBitterSea chapter 28 . 4/16/2023
That’s quite the letter :)
DarkBitterSea chapter 27 . 1/15/2023
A very happy movie like ending.
heytwee chapter 33 . 12/23/2022
This was maddeningly beautiful! LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH.
DarkBitterSea chapter 26 . 11/27/2022
*Adventure music ensues*
DarkBitterSea chapter 25 . 11/20/2022
I don’t understand her logic of him trying to take Jamie away.
blb1000 chapter 13 . 11/17/2022
We haven't heard much more from Mike in awhile. Guessing he'll be at the Benefit too...
blb1000 chapter 5 . 11/6/2022
Love their banter together!
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