Reviews for Indecent Proposal
Teresa R chapter 4 . 12/5/2021
he has a lot of ass kissing to do
Teresa R chapter 3 . 12/5/2021
I am glad I seen the rec on facebook
Teresa R chapter 2 . 12/5/2021
I LOVE her
Teresa R chapter 1 . 12/5/2021
she is fun
AlexandraaCullen chapter 17 . 12/2/2021
I had this gut feeling from nearly the beginning of the story till now that Jamie and Bella’s parents weren’t alive anymore, something about the way she spoke of them and the way Bella seemed to zone out, her eyes glazing over and seemed sad and lost at times. I’m not surprised but I bet Edward sure is!
Obsessedreader83 chapter 33 . 10/16/2021
Thank u so much for sharing this story, I absolutely loved it! These characters and your writing were fantastic.
Lizdayanna chapter 1 . 10/2/2021
Hi Paty! I just read the last outtake of the Spanish traslation of this story and I want to say thank you! You're an extraodinarie author and it's wonderful be able to read your work in our language. So thank you very much for give your permission to do this translation. Hope we can read more of your stories in the future! Regards from Cali, Colombia. Diana
Aislinn Massi chapter 33 . 9/29/2021
Hi! Thank you very much for allowing the spanish translation of this story, I must say that I wanted more since chapter one, and aboslutely loved every bit of it, I wanted to cry when the truth was discovered, all about Jamie, Renee and Charlie, how Bella escaped from Edward after Bree said everything, it was so hurtful but necessary, I loved to see them with children and how Edward went all for Maia, I just loved it, you are an amazing author!
Tata XOXO chapter 33 . 9/27/2021
Hi! I'm Tata from Colombia... and I really love this story... Bella is unexpected and I love all the Characters... specially Maia!
Thanks a lot for let Ale to translate this story to spanish...
PD: Sorry about my english!
Kisses!
XOXO
Mamuelita144 chapter 33 . 9/25/2021
Muchas gracias por tan hermosa historia, la seguí de principio a fin.
Te agradezco por permitir que la traducción y así poder disfrutarla. Espero seguir leyendo historias tuyas. Saludos desde Colombia
Manligrez chapter 31 . 9/25/2021
Hello Paty! I just read the last outtake of the Spanish traslation of this story and I want to say thank you! You're an extraodinarie author and it's wonderful be able to read your work in our language. So thank you very much for give your permission to do this translation. Hope we can read more of your stories in the future! Regards from Granada (Spain)
Mafer chapter 1 . 9/24/2021
Hola Paty!
I just read the last outtake of the Spanish traslation of this story and I want to say thank you! You're an extraodinarie author and it's wonderful be able to read your work in our language. So thank you very much for give your permission to do this translation. Hope we can read more of your stories in the future! Regards from México :)
Guest chapter 33 . 9/24/2021
Gracias, gracias por decirle si a las chicas para traducir tus historias... Sin duda fue de mis favoritos, fan de Maia y Mase se llevo el capítulo con eso último
Paola Lightwood chapter 33 . 9/26/2021
Hello :) I just read the Spanish translation of your story and wanted to say thank you! You're an incredible story teller, I really enjoyed your story. Thank you so much to allow the translation. Greetings from México.

En verdad disfruté mucho la historia :) Gracias por escribirla y espero que des más permisos para tus otras historias :)
NarMaVeg chapter 33 . 9/25/2021
Thanks a million for allowing AlePattz to translate your story, I loved it from beginning to end ! greetings from Mexico.
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